blink August 02, 2015 one dayyou will find meagainfar from this timeand its treasuredthings2015-Rene Share Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Magpie poetry senryu Share Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments TessaLeFaeAugust 2, 2015 at 8:54 PMYour work always makes me feel, even when I don't want to. That is what poetry should do.ReplyDeleteRepliesUnknownAugust 2, 2015 at 8:59 PMThank you for telling me, Tessa, this means so much :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyOther MaryAugust 2, 2015 at 9:09 PMVolumes here in these few lines, Rene. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyWendy BourkeAugust 2, 2015 at 10:28 PMI agree with Other Mary: there's a lot in these few - but exquisite and evocative - transcendent lines. Lovely words! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyAugust 2, 2015 at 11:05 PMThis is a very intriguing poem......makes one wish for more, which is the sign of a good poem!!!!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyC.C.August 3, 2015 at 12:25 AMSuch beauty in this brevity :-)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRosemary Nissen-WadeAugust 3, 2015 at 7:08 AMLovely! You make me believe in the story you tell.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKutamunAugust 3, 2015 at 8:29 AMReminds me of the Clannad song from "last of the mohicans "- i will find you ..ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownAugust 3, 2015 at 9:39 AMThis poem speaks such volumes in such few words! Its amazing :DLots of love,SanaaReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJae RoseAugust 3, 2015 at 9:48 AMYes...less is more..this piece is packed with intensity and leaves me with lots of questions - which is always goodReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathe W.August 3, 2015 at 9:56 AMyes- once again.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenAugust 3, 2015 at 11:11 AMYour specialty ~~ spare, chock full of meaning. Beautiful write!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGen Giggles August 3, 2015 at 4:59 PMTime can make a difference in the people we know.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBekkie SanchezAugust 4, 2015 at 3:44 PMI love brevity and you're a master at it.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneAugust 5, 2015 at 3:31 PM"treasured things" - this was one of them.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCasey FreelandAugust 10, 2015 at 4:16 PMI've missed these.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
Your work always makes me feel, even when I don't want to. That is what poetry should do.
ReplyDeleteThank you for telling me, Tessa, this means so much :)
DeleteVolumes here in these few lines, Rene.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Other Mary: there's a lot in these few - but exquisite and evocative - transcendent lines. Lovely words!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very intriguing poem......makes one wish for more, which is the sign of a good poem!!!!
ReplyDeleteSuch beauty in this brevity :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely! You make me believe in the story you tell.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of the Clannad song from "last of the mohicans "- i will find you ..
ReplyDeleteThis poem speaks such volumes in such few words! Its amazing :D
ReplyDeleteLots of love,
Sanaa
Yes...less is more..this piece is packed with intensity and leaves me with lots of questions - which is always good
ReplyDeleteyes- once again.
ReplyDeleteYour specialty ~~ spare, chock full of meaning. Beautiful write!
ReplyDeleteTime can make a difference in the people we know.
ReplyDeleteI love brevity and you're a master at it.
ReplyDelete"treasured things" - this was one of them.
ReplyDeleteI've missed these.
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