bask April 19, 2015 Image via Magpie Tales how the light this time of the day warms my brittle soul small & grey Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Poetry senryu magpie poem Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Kathe W.April 19, 2015 at 10:11 AMnice take on this image! Have a great day! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownApril 19, 2015 at 10:57 AMBeautiful! I love short poetry that packs a sweet punch like this. :-) ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyNatašekApril 19, 2015 at 12:14 PMlight can have such an effect on how we feel.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySanaa RizviApril 19, 2015 at 1:11 PMThis is so beautiful..... Love the picture..Its so effectively portraying your thoughts :)Lots of love,SanaaReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyApril 19, 2015 at 1:22 PMI love the varying hues of the light. Loved this senryu.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousApril 19, 2015 at 2:07 PMShort and very poetic indeed! Wonderful write!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyZQApril 19, 2015 at 2:09 PMThis was very nice... like the picture!ZQReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergApril 19, 2015 at 2:15 PMLove the write.. Somehow the grey has a way of working itself inwards.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneApril 19, 2015 at 2:40 PMA soul with 50 shades of grey...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKayApril 19, 2015 at 4:40 PMExcellent!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKayApril 19, 2015 at 4:40 PMExcellent!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyDonna@LivingFromHappinessApril 19, 2015 at 5:16 PMWhat the light can do for us....wonderful!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGailApril 19, 2015 at 5:18 PMWhat a beautiful poem!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryApril 19, 2015 at 5:23 PMThank goodness for that bit of light. Sometimes a bit of light is all that is needed.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJinksyApril 19, 2015 at 5:35 PMA poignant poem...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousApril 19, 2015 at 5:58 PMLovely.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplytotomaiApril 20, 2015 at 7:35 AMpowerful image by the way. the poem really tells a story even with few words. not all are kept in the dark :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownApril 20, 2015 at 7:43 AMBeautifully arranged, well doneReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJae RoseApril 20, 2015 at 9:12 AMAny light however small which nourishes our soul can only be goodReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGen Giggles April 20, 2015 at 5:57 PMIts a lonely poem, perhaps the sun will bring color.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyC.C.April 21, 2015 at 12:54 AMThe title is perfectly chosen for the words that so effectively portray that meaning. Loved this.ReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsApril 21, 2015 at 5:16 PMPleasantly charmed!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenaApril 23, 2015 at 1:39 PMSometimes grey is a comforting colour!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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nice take on this image! Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love short poetry that packs a sweet punch like this. :-)
ReplyDeletelight can have such an effect on how we feel.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful..... Love the picture..
ReplyDeleteIts so effectively portraying your thoughts :)
Lots of love,
Sanaa
I love the varying hues of the light. Loved this senryu.
ReplyDeleteShort and very poetic indeed! Wonderful write!
ReplyDeleteThis was very nice... like the picture!
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Love the write.. Somehow the grey has a way of working itself inwards.
ReplyDeleteA soul with 50 shades of grey...
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteWhat the light can do for us....wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness for that bit of light. Sometimes a bit of light is all that is needed.
ReplyDeleteA poignant poem...
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeletepowerful image by the way.
ReplyDeletethe poem really tells a story even with few words. not all are kept in the dark :)
Beautifully arranged, well done
ReplyDeleteAny light however small which nourishes our soul can only be good
ReplyDeleteIts a lonely poem, perhaps the sun will bring color.
ReplyDeleteThe title is perfectly chosen for the words that so effectively portray that meaning. Loved this.
ReplyDeletePleasantly charmed!
ReplyDeleteSometimes grey is a comforting colour!
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