keith haring via magpie tales so which way are you up for? have you got yourself a hunch or a notion? go on and twirl your own pinwheel signpost or hop a ride on a boxcar sideshow so which way are you up for? your toes tripping up on compass roses? true north is them good shoes that brought you through narrow streets that defined & confined truth so which way are you up for? blaze a trail that inspires & ignites hope light a fire for the lost to come find you so which way are you up to, which way are you up for? 2014-Rene
nice take on this image! Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love short poetry that packs a sweet punch like this. :-)
ReplyDeletelight can have such an effect on how we feel.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful..... Love the picture..
ReplyDeleteIts so effectively portraying your thoughts :)
Lots of love,
Sanaa
I love the varying hues of the light. Loved this senryu.
ReplyDeleteShort and very poetic indeed! Wonderful write!
ReplyDeleteThis was very nice... like the picture!
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Love the write.. Somehow the grey has a way of working itself inwards.
ReplyDeleteA soul with 50 shades of grey...
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteWhat the light can do for us....wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness for that bit of light. Sometimes a bit of light is all that is needed.
ReplyDeleteA poignant poem...
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeletepowerful image by the way.
ReplyDeletethe poem really tells a story even with few words. not all are kept in the dark :)
Beautifully arranged, well done
ReplyDeleteAny light however small which nourishes our soul can only be good
ReplyDeleteIts a lonely poem, perhaps the sun will bring color.
ReplyDeleteThe title is perfectly chosen for the words that so effectively portray that meaning. Loved this.
ReplyDeletePleasantly charmed!
ReplyDeleteSometimes grey is a comforting colour!
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