Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
nice take on this image! Have a great day!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful! I love short poetry that packs a sweet punch like this. :-)
ReplyDeletelight can have such an effect on how we feel.
ReplyDeleteThis is so beautiful..... Love the picture..
ReplyDeleteIts so effectively portraying your thoughts :)
Lots of love,
Sanaa
I love the varying hues of the light. Loved this senryu.
ReplyDeleteShort and very poetic indeed! Wonderful write!
ReplyDeleteThis was very nice... like the picture!
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Love the write.. Somehow the grey has a way of working itself inwards.
ReplyDeleteA soul with 50 shades of grey...
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteWhat the light can do for us....wonderful!
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness for that bit of light. Sometimes a bit of light is all that is needed.
ReplyDeleteA poignant poem...
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDeletepowerful image by the way.
ReplyDeletethe poem really tells a story even with few words. not all are kept in the dark :)
Beautifully arranged, well done
ReplyDeleteAny light however small which nourishes our soul can only be good
ReplyDeleteIts a lonely poem, perhaps the sun will bring color.
ReplyDeleteThe title is perfectly chosen for the words that so effectively portray that meaning. Loved this.
ReplyDeletePleasantly charmed!
ReplyDeleteSometimes grey is a comforting colour!
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