Skip to main content

bask


Image via Magpie Tales

how
the light
this time of the day
warms my brittle 
soul small
& grey

Labels:

Comments

  1. Kathe W.April 19, 2015 at 10:11 AM

    nice take on this image! Have a great day!

    ReplyDelete
  2. UnknownApril 19, 2015 at 10:57 AM

    Beautiful! I love short poetry that packs a sweet punch like this. :-)

    ReplyDelete
  3. NatašekApril 19, 2015 at 12:14 PM

    light can have such an effect on how we feel.

    ReplyDelete
  4. Sanaa RizviApril 19, 2015 at 1:11 PM

    This is so beautiful..... Love the picture..
    Its so effectively portraying your thoughts :)
    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

    ReplyDelete
  5. Sherry Blue SkyApril 19, 2015 at 1:22 PM

    I love the varying hues of the light. Loved this senryu.

    ReplyDelete
  6. AnonymousApril 19, 2015 at 2:07 PM

    Short and very poetic indeed! Wonderful write!

    ReplyDelete
  7. ZQApril 19, 2015 at 2:09 PM

    This was very nice... like the picture!
    ZQ

    ReplyDelete
  8. brudbergApril 19, 2015 at 2:15 PM

    Love the write.. Somehow the grey has a way of working itself inwards.

    ReplyDelete
  9. BerowneApril 19, 2015 at 2:40 PM

    A soul with 50 shades of grey...

    ReplyDelete
  10. KayApril 19, 2015 at 4:40 PM

    Excellent!

    ReplyDelete
  11. KayApril 19, 2015 at 4:40 PM

    Excellent!

    ReplyDelete
  12. Donna@LivingFromHappinessApril 19, 2015 at 5:16 PM

    What the light can do for us....wonderful!

    ReplyDelete
  13. GailApril 19, 2015 at 5:18 PM

    What a beautiful poem!

    ReplyDelete
  14. MaryApril 19, 2015 at 5:23 PM

    Thank goodness for that bit of light. Sometimes a bit of light is all that is needed.

    ReplyDelete
  15. JinksyApril 19, 2015 at 5:35 PM

    A poignant poem...

    ReplyDelete
  16. AnonymousApril 19, 2015 at 5:58 PM

    Lovely.

    ReplyDelete
  17. totomaiApril 20, 2015 at 7:35 AM

    powerful image by the way.

    the poem really tells a story even with few words. not all are kept in the dark :)

    ReplyDelete
  18. UnknownApril 20, 2015 at 7:43 AM

    Beautifully arranged, well done

    ReplyDelete
  19. Jae RoseApril 20, 2015 at 9:12 AM

    Any light however small which nourishes our soul can only be good

    ReplyDelete
  20. Gen Giggles April 20, 2015 at 5:57 PM

    Its a lonely poem, perhaps the sun will bring color.

    ReplyDelete
  21. C.C.April 21, 2015 at 12:54 AM

    The title is perfectly chosen for the words that so effectively portray that meaning. Loved this.

    ReplyDelete
  22. 21 WitsApril 21, 2015 at 5:16 PM

    Pleasantly charmed!

    ReplyDelete
  23. HelenaApril 23, 2015 at 1:39 PM

    Sometimes grey is a comforting colour!

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :

Popular posts from this blog

natasha

There was a haunting beauty behind her eyes, beyond her sorrow, a beauty that found its way into one’s heart and led them home.
2 comments
Read more

north

keith haring via magpie tales so which way are you up for? have you got yourself a hunch or a notion? go on and twirl your own pinwheel signpost or hop a ride on a boxcar sideshow so which way are you up for? your toes tripping up on compass roses? true north is them good shoes that brought you through narrow streets that defined & confined truth so which way are you up for? blaze a trail that inspires & ignites hope light a fire for the lost to come find you so which way are you up to, which way are you up for? 2014-Rene
9 comments
Read more