Image via Magpie Tales   i won't be leaving here with you  nor will you be staying with me  for any longer than you see fit  that is just the way of it   it is the silent refrain of my being  i won't be leaving here with you  but i will stay, until my time is done  as your ceremonial chosen one   no, this won't be my last tour  though it is the first time  i won't be leaving here with you  shh, now, darling. this is what i do   i see it in your eyes, our time's  drawing to a close. please don't mind   the tears  they come, they go,  it's true... i won't be leaving here with you  Rene ~ December 8, 2012
 
 
This is majestic in its simplicity!
ReplyDeleteLovely Rene, as CC says majestic.
ReplyDeleteYou achieved a paean of praise in few words...
ReplyDeleteThat heart seems vulnerable by the person's acquiescence . . . .
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing and such a powerful conveyance of the situation.
Thank you
This is very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOh yes she was, the beautiful one!
ReplyDeleteSimply powerful.
ReplyDeletelovely in it's simplicity!
ReplyDeleteLovely sense of anticipation here!
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
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Kudos.
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