majesty July 27, 2014 my heart a foreign country waiting wild for a sun waiting for a nod from the beautiful one to come 2014- Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Magpie Tales poetry Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments C.C.July 27, 2014 at 10:50 PMThis is majestic in its simplicity!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMichaelJuly 27, 2014 at 11:14 PMLovely Rene, as CC says majestic.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJinksyJuly 28, 2014 at 6:08 AMYou achieved a paean of praise in few words...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyStormcat PoetryJuly 28, 2014 at 1:26 PMThat heart seems vulnerable by the person's acquiescence . . . .Beautiful writing and such a powerful conveyance of the situation.Thank youReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyJuly 28, 2014 at 2:13 PMThis is very beautiful.ReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsJuly 28, 2014 at 5:09 PMOh yes she was, the beautiful one!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySilverGardeniaJuly 28, 2014 at 11:19 PMSimply powerful.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathe W.July 28, 2014 at 11:27 PMlovely in it's simplicity!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousJuly 29, 2014 at 9:45 AMLovely sense of anticipation here!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyZQJuly 29, 2014 at 2:19 PMWonderful!ZQReplyDeleteRepliesReplyOther MaryJuly 29, 2014 at 4:03 PMKudos.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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This is majestic in its simplicity!
ReplyDeleteLovely Rene, as CC says majestic.
ReplyDeleteYou achieved a paean of praise in few words...
ReplyDeleteThat heart seems vulnerable by the person's acquiescence . . . .
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing and such a powerful conveyance of the situation.
Thank you
This is very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOh yes she was, the beautiful one!
ReplyDeleteSimply powerful.
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ReplyDeleteLovely sense of anticipation here!
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Kudos.
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