this is the story of a girl who lived in the basement of the girl next door sheltered in the confines of a suburban tract house dungeon; her punishment for runnin' wild with dreams half unlatched she ran like a spirit in the night from those badlands wind blowin' through her hair shielding her eyes from the blinding light she hugged onto a shoreline of hope someday soon, she's not sure when her savior will rise up from the streets with an armload of rain soaked roses and second chances Rene ~ 2010 Click Here to join Magpie Tales creative writing group .

My dear Rene ... you go right ahead and rant as much as you like. As long as the ranting produces this kind of great poetry.
ReplyDeletehey whatever it takes eh? lifes not always what we want...i am glad your comment box is open again..smiles...no dead language here...what was that old(er) song...shout, shout, let it all out...
ReplyDeleteFruity Wheels: what a wonderful visual for this piece.
ReplyDeleteYour thoughts aren't outdated, Rene. They're nebulous.
Pearl