the world stops and stares
the sound of your voice
a lake of pin drops
freeze and thaw mid-air
I can't hear you now
but down come the rain
I can hear you then
I will know your name
Rene ~ February 23, 2013
Some scrawling on a Saturday morning
40 words 40 syllables
the sound of your voice
a lake of pin drops
freeze and thaw mid-air
I can't hear you now
but down come the rain
I can hear you then
I will know your name
Rene ~ February 23, 2013
Some scrawling on a Saturday morning
40 words 40 syllables
i hear you in the rain...intriguing...especially with the title...evocative rene...
ReplyDeleteawww.
ReplyDeleteIt's funny some see this as a love poem and some see it as something darker and I dig that
ReplyDeleteLovely transition from ice droplets to rain droplets.
ReplyDelete"a lake of pin drops" spoke to me....it's a metaphor for those sounds, voices, ideas, and moments we're too busy or too arrogant to pay attention to
ReplyDeleteor whatever...great 40