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Angus Dei

          Photo credit: Caroline Knopf



blessed 
oh lord
with these, thine fish
but
could you send me
a hamburger 
with a side of chips

2016-Rene

Comments

  1. I love your sense of humor in this. Well done.

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  2. You made me smile! Enjoyed your jest!

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  3. Ha - well yes indeed He could! Perhaps an order of fries as well?

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  4. haha - this was very funny...sometimes one just needs a bit more than fish...

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  5. Brilliant.....especially the witty play on words with the title and the request for a hamburger :-P

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  6. Hahahahahahaha,yes. I think we have all been there, having bread but wanting something inside. I appreciate the humour ;).

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  7. Good one! loved the way it changed its course to a lighter version!

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