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photo by Francesca Woodman


how divine the child
gone wild
fresh tart
confection 
sweet hot
jelly roll giggle & 
blues storm chaser
done spun herself plum dizzy 
now everybody in the spool

2016-Rene




Comments

  1. justsomethoughts...January 24, 2016 at 1:58 PM

    got caught in the spin cycle of your words.
    well done.

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  2. Kathe W.January 24, 2016 at 2:27 PM

    well done= love the last line!

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  3. brudbergJanuary 24, 2016 at 2:40 PM

    I think a girl like that is yearn that weave the fabrics of joy...

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  4. ✿January 24, 2016 at 2:42 PM

    Damn, this is awesome!!! Every word just drips like melted warm sugar-honey drizzling down the wrists to the inner elbows. Seriously. So sexy and yummy and just absolutely fantastic poetry.

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  5. ✿January 24, 2016 at 2:43 PM

    PERFECT word-magic to go with that picture.

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  6. annell4January 24, 2016 at 2:54 PM

    Yes, I liked it very much!

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  7. Donna@LivingFromHappinessJanuary 24, 2016 at 4:05 PM

    I agree...perfect words to go with that picture. I felt myself getting dizzy as I spun too back to my childhood. Days of wild spinning.

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  8. De JacksonJanuary 24, 2016 at 4:27 PM

    Love love LOVE "giggle storm chaser," especially.

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  9. MaryJanuary 24, 2016 at 4:49 PM

    I like 'everybody in a spool.' I can picture that!

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  10. Sanaa RizviJanuary 24, 2016 at 5:11 PM

    Gorgeous :D

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  11. Sherry Blue SkyJanuary 24, 2016 at 5:40 PM

    This poem spun me down the page most effectively. Nice to see you, Rene.

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  12. J.N.T.January 24, 2016 at 8:41 PM

    Such a whirling, twirling pretty child she is! nice poem.

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  13. Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)January 25, 2016 at 5:56 AM

    this spun with youthful innocence

    gracias

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  14. Tess KincaidJanuary 25, 2016 at 12:52 PM

    Jelly roll and spool...yum.

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  15. HelenJanuary 26, 2016 at 11:42 AM

    Gold star good!

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  16. Susan AndersonJanuary 26, 2016 at 4:46 PM

    Excellent!

    =)

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  17. C. SandlinJanuary 28, 2016 at 3:10 PM

    This makes me want to cheer--what a great energy to encounter on an afternoon!

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  18. Buddah MoskowitzJanuary 29, 2016 at 11:39 AM

    This felt like a dizzy, twirling sweet treat!

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  19. MichaelJanuary 29, 2016 at 8:54 PM

    Its fun to get caught up in the fun of young girls. Silly, yes...but somehow noble

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  20. NoirfifreJanuary 30, 2016 at 12:07 PM

    You actually described the image to a T. Spot on! She did "spun herself plump dizzy."

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