and now
i was a part of it,
alright
my custom fit cradle
indented formidably
into
earth from sky
a few looked down
(three to be exact)
with
a blend of love,hate
and who gives
a damn
upon
a pillar
yet i was theirs
creation’s foundling
2015-Rene
"Creation's foundling"......fantastic!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this one!
ReplyDeletethat was some powerful ending - an exclamation point.
ReplyDeletebeautiful take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteStellar closing line :D
ReplyDeleteWhen we fall to earth we can create what we desire - angel, devil or human...perhaps the latter allows for all variations ;)
ReplyDeleteJai said what I could not find the words for...
ReplyDeleteHighly imaginative, and quite well done, take on the prompt.
ReplyDelete"Three Men And A Baby"? Very interesting POV.
ReplyDeleteQuite Imaginative and a lovely read!
ReplyDeleteBeing a part of it can be delightful. :)
ReplyDeleteOuch , Icarus landing
ReplyDeletevery well done- love the last line!
ReplyDeleteimaginative and powerful piece
ReplyDeleteAshamed
Love the energy that sparkles out of each word. And the last line, perfect.
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift for which we are all grateful .....
ReplyDeleteMaybe your best...
ReplyDeletethe mixture of those three emotions. I read that 3 times out loud. quite enjoyable
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