bon voyage December 14, 2014 photograph by Robert Doisneau via Magpie Tales welcome traveler your desire is not lost in translation here's a postcard in the mother tongue a scrapbook memory from a brighter sun 2014-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Sherry Blue SkyDecember 14, 2014 at 9:26 PMOh I love those closing lines...perfect!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyYvonne OsborneDecember 14, 2014 at 10:17 PMThe last stanza makes this for me as well. Good take on the image!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergDecember 15, 2014 at 12:41 AMThis so much said in so few words. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaria MaineroDecember 15, 2014 at 1:16 AMSo beautiful and concise! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousDecember 15, 2014 at 6:47 AMnice !ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyNamrataDecember 15, 2014 at 11:42 AMLines in a nice rhythm.. Like it! :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyhyperCRYPTICalDecember 15, 2014 at 12:03 PMSo well done.Anna :o]ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidDecember 15, 2014 at 3:10 PMNice! Good to see you Rene...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRommyDecember 17, 2014 at 6:08 AMPostcard in the mother tongue...love the playfulness of that line!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyphilDecember 20, 2014 at 11:25 AMBravo! Favorite magpie this week!~pReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathe W.December 21, 2014 at 7:40 PMsuccinct and sexy!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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Oh I love those closing lines...perfect!
ReplyDeleteThe last stanza makes this for me as well. Good take on the image!
ReplyDeleteThis so much said in so few words.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and concise!
ReplyDeletenice !
ReplyDeleteLines in a nice rhythm.. Like it! :)
ReplyDeleteSo well done.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Nice! Good to see you Rene...
ReplyDeletePostcard in the mother tongue...love the playfulness of that line!
ReplyDeleteBravo!
ReplyDeleteFavorite magpie this week!
~p
succinct and sexy!
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