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Escher via Magpie Tales

your smile
invincible,
elastic

a soap bubble
gibraltar
rising
under an origami
ribcage

or maybe it's just gastric!

2014-Rene




Comments

  1. Sherry Blue SkyNovember 30, 2014 at 8:56 PM

    This made me smile, Rene! Hope all is well with you!

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  2. Anita SabatDecember 1, 2014 at 1:00 AM

    We can only assume the secret of the smile!
    Only the wearer of the smile is aware of the real reason :)
    Clean Bowled

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  3. AnonymousDecember 1, 2014 at 2:04 AM

    Very entertaining and creative response to the prompt!

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  4. MarianDecember 1, 2014 at 5:57 AM

    probably, though describing it loftily is always better :)

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  5. Rommy Cortez-DriksDecember 1, 2014 at 7:39 AM

    Soap bubble Gibraltar... I love it!

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  6. humbirdDecember 1, 2014 at 8:13 AM

    So inventively written! x

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  7. HelenDecember 1, 2014 at 10:24 AM

    Visiting your blog is always thoroughly enjoyable!!

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  8. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerDecember 1, 2014 at 12:21 PM

    This just made me smile! Happy Monday!

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  9. BerowneDecember 1, 2014 at 3:58 PM

    And happy gastricity to all..!

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  10. Irish GumboDecember 2, 2014 at 9:53 PM

    Great play of textures and consistencies, with one hell of a punch line. I dig it, Rene!

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  11. Silent Otto December 4, 2014 at 7:15 AM

    Every Gastro Cloud has a silver lining , its "The Poetics Of Space "!

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