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Escher via Magpie Tales

your smile
invincible,
elastic

a soap bubble
gibraltar
rising
under an origami
ribcage

or maybe it's just gastric!

2014-Rene




Comments

  1. This made me smile, Rene! Hope all is well with you!

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  2. We can only assume the secret of the smile!
    Only the wearer of the smile is aware of the real reason :)
    Clean Bowled

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  3. Very entertaining and creative response to the prompt!

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  4. probably, though describing it loftily is always better :)

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  5. Soap bubble Gibraltar... I love it!

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  6. Visiting your blog is always thoroughly enjoyable!!

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  7. Great play of textures and consistencies, with one hell of a punch line. I dig it, Rene!

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  8. Every Gastro Cloud has a silver lining , its "The Poetics Of Space "!

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