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damsel


she
pinned
namesakes
in her hair
beckoning summer
igniting blooms that lit her way

© 2014-Rene
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  1. PearlJune 22, 2014 at 5:02 PM

    How utterly sweet.

    A peony to you, Rene.

    Pearl

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  2. Gillena CoxJune 22, 2014 at 5:13 PM

    luv your Fibonacci, i haven't used that form in a long while, beautiful poem


    'Sunday Savvy' at my blog is now a meme is about Sundays so remember to drop in and linkup any Sunday

    much love...

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  3. Preeti S.June 22, 2014 at 5:57 PM

    The picture beautifully connects with the poem. Lovely! :)

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  4. Stafford RayJune 22, 2014 at 6:33 PM

    gorgeous.

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  5. Brian MillerJune 22, 2014 at 6:44 PM

    there is magic in those last couple lines rene...

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  6. ZQJune 22, 2014 at 6:55 PM

    Excellent!
    ZQ

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  7. TruedessaJune 22, 2014 at 9:13 PM

    lovely words..especially enjoyed the last line..

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  8. Vodka MomJune 22, 2014 at 10:12 PM

    LOVE! as usual....

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  9. Arushi AhujaJune 23, 2014 at 10:00 AM

    so beautiful!!

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  10. Tess KincaidJune 23, 2014 at 4:31 PM

    Loveliness!

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  11. rallentandaJune 23, 2014 at 8:27 PM

    Love this form.Beautiful.

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  12. Silent Otto June 24, 2014 at 9:46 AM

    Ahoy ! The beacons of Gondor are lit ....

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  13. SusanJune 24, 2014 at 10:52 AM

    Bloom to bloom to bloom! Very nice image.

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  14. HelenaJune 24, 2014 at 3:50 PM

    Blooming marvelous! Succinctly and summery sweet alright!

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  15. Doctor FTSEJune 25, 2014 at 2:00 AM

    Cleverly done. I didn't know Fibonacci was used as a poetic form - not much used for epic poems?

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  16. Carrie Van HornJune 25, 2014 at 6:56 PM

    A delightful write Rene. :-)

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  17. Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJune 25, 2014 at 8:39 PM

    Lovely, lovely write Rene!

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  18. Cait O'ConnorJune 26, 2014 at 12:05 PM

    Lovely indeed.

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  19. Eddie BluelightsJune 27, 2014 at 6:15 PM

    Love it
    A total surprise ~ Eddie

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