his master's choice April 27, 2014 hold a cricket to your ear listen very hard that is the sound of being stuck lonely contagious drinking songs for the status quo honesty dropping on all fours tumbling in gutters scrolling down until we're numb © 2014-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Fibonacci magpietales poetry Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments kaykualaApril 27, 2014 at 11:24 AMEmulating a dog's feeling can well be an effort to understand them better! Nicely Rene! And good Fibonacci!HankReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathe W.April 27, 2014 at 11:28 AMI love this line- so very true!"honesty dropping on all fours "ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyScottlBApril 27, 2014 at 11:49 AM"The sound of being stuck" a line that makes you move to see if you're really free.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrenda wApril 27, 2014 at 12:22 PMoh...this speaks deep truth.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyApril 27, 2014 at 1:10 PMWhat a cool photo. I love "honesty dropping on all fours". I am reading right now a wonderful book called The Art of Racing in the Rain - a family story told through the dog's eyes. Quite wonderful.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergApril 27, 2014 at 3:59 PMI love how you start it.. indeed the cricket's song can be quite forlornReplyDeleteRepliesReplyscotthastiepoetApril 27, 2014 at 4:12 PMFresh and original... Loved this... With Best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.comReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenaApril 27, 2014 at 4:35 PMBravo! Well penned!ReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsApril 27, 2014 at 6:12 PMSo true, very still we can hear it too!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyIndigo RothApril 27, 2014 at 6:26 PMHey Rene! "Scrolling down until we're numb" speaks to me. And that is a lovely photo. Your place? Your awesome pooch? Indigo xReplyDeleteRepliesReplySusanApril 27, 2014 at 6:31 PMPoor cricket! Poor drunk. poor dog. Don't scroll down ....ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJinksyApril 28, 2014 at 5:39 AMSave us from that sound of being stuck! LOLReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneApril 28, 2014 at 7:35 AMNimble and very well expressed.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBelva Rae StaplesApril 28, 2014 at 8:28 PMNice work and those drinking songs are contagious!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyhyperCRYPTICalApril 30, 2014 at 6:44 AMExcellent - and I remember those drinking songs of long ago...Anna :o]ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySusan AndersonApril 30, 2014 at 11:21 AMa cricket….the sound of being stuck.I like that.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySilent Otto May 1, 2014 at 2:25 AMBeware The Black Dog ! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidMay 1, 2014 at 1:21 PMA cricket to your ear...I like.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCait O'ConnorMay 1, 2014 at 4:26 PMGreat poem.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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Emulating a dog's feeling can well be an effort to understand them better! Nicely Rene! And good Fibonacci!
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I love this line- so very true!
ReplyDelete"honesty dropping on all fours "
"The sound of being stuck" a line that makes you move to see if you're really free.
ReplyDeleteoh...this speaks deep truth.
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool photo. I love "honesty dropping on all fours". I am reading right now a wonderful book called The Art of Racing in the Rain - a family story told through the dog's eyes. Quite wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI love how you start it.. indeed the cricket's song can be quite forlorn
ReplyDeleteFresh and original... Loved this... With Best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteBravo! Well penned!
ReplyDeleteSo true, very still we can hear it too!
ReplyDeleteHey Rene! "Scrolling down until we're numb" speaks to me. And that is a lovely photo. Your place? Your awesome pooch? Indigo x
ReplyDeletePoor cricket! Poor drunk. poor dog. Don't scroll down ....
ReplyDeleteSave us from that sound of being stuck! LOL
ReplyDeleteNimble and very well expressed.
ReplyDeleteNice work and those drinking songs are contagious!
ReplyDeleteExcellent - and I remember those drinking songs of long ago...
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
a cricket….the sound of being stuck.
ReplyDeleteI like that.
Beware The Black Dog !
ReplyDeleteA cricket to your ear...I like.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem.
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