vernal March 14, 2013 unsprung kick the bars down set on fire the grey sails scream technicolor,wake the skies riot bright Rene ~ March 14, 2013 For d'Verse Poets Pub - Form For All~Cinquain Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Cinquain d'verse Form For All life love Poem poetry spring writing Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Brian MillerMarch 14, 2013 at 9:02 PMscream technicolor wake the sky...haha i like line...think i might drop a comma or some punctuation in the middle of it...unless you meant it one thought...i read two there though...i like the intensity though in it...come on spring!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMargaretMarch 14, 2013 at 11:01 PMvernal... what a cool word. I'm ready for technicolor... plan on driving further south in a few weeks... perhaps Charleston, SC. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHeidiMarch 15, 2013 at 12:11 AMAwesome cinquain! It's calling spring out to dance!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyhenry clemmonsMarch 15, 2013 at 12:39 AMKind of a kick a$$ voice. Very confident and sure. I liked the voice and presentation alot. Very well work with the form.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathy ReedMarch 15, 2013 at 2:42 AMI love 'the grey riot' ...and the colors that get unsprung..:)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplykelvin s.m.March 15, 2013 at 2:54 AM..scream technicolor, wake the sky turn bright --- ha, now that's vernal.... great take... smiles...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySabio LantzMarch 15, 2013 at 3:35 AMYou show 'em. Go get those clouds!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergMarch 15, 2013 at 5:10 AMThat's what we all long for, scream technicolor.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRosemary Nissen-WadeMarch 15, 2013 at 7:44 AMWow, that says it.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPearlMarch 15, 2013 at 9:02 AMVernal is right.Shared this on FB. You knock me out, man.PearlReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLaurie KolpMarch 15, 2013 at 9:30 AMscream technicolor... that's great, ReneReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousMarch 15, 2013 at 9:41 AMRene, that's the way to deal with winter - a technicolour scream :-) Fabulous inages and use of the cinquain form.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyShellyMarch 15, 2013 at 10:30 AMMmmmm- lovin' this!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownMarch 15, 2013 at 4:04 PM"riot bright" you sound like my kind of person. :) we should all riot bright! xReplyDeleteRepliesReplyVodka MomMarch 16, 2013 at 9:39 AMWe are having a raging snowstorm here right now. And I'm pissed.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKodjo DeynooMarch 18, 2013 at 2:44 AMOh yea all the energy and protestation is shown here ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryMarch 18, 2013 at 7:35 AMGreat cinquain. Enjoyed the burst of color!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySabio LantzMarch 18, 2013 at 7:46 AMFantastic, profane and enlivening ! Red !ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownMarch 18, 2013 at 1:00 PMLoudly.Freely.Deeply.Do it.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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scream technicolor wake the sky...haha i like line...think i might drop a comma or some punctuation in the middle of it...unless you meant it one thought...i read two there though...i like the intensity though in it...
ReplyDeletecome on spring!
vernal... what a cool word. I'm ready for technicolor... plan on driving further south in a few weeks... perhaps Charleston, SC. :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome cinquain! It's calling spring out to dance!
ReplyDeleteKind of a kick a$$ voice. Very confident and sure. I liked the voice and presentation alot. Very well work with the form.
ReplyDeleteI love 'the grey riot' ...and the colors that get unsprung..:)
ReplyDelete..scream technicolor, wake the sky turn bright --- ha, now that's vernal.... great take... smiles...
ReplyDeleteYou show 'em. Go get those clouds!
ReplyDeleteThat's what we all long for, scream technicolor.
ReplyDeleteWow, that says it.
ReplyDeleteVernal is right.
ReplyDeleteShared this on FB. You knock me out, man.
Pearl
scream technicolor... that's great, Rene
ReplyDeleteRene, that's the way to deal with winter - a technicolour scream :-) Fabulous inages and use of the cinquain form.
ReplyDeleteMmmmm- lovin' this!
ReplyDelete"riot bright" you sound like my kind of person. :) we should all riot bright! x
ReplyDeleteWe are having a raging snowstorm here right now.
ReplyDeleteAnd I'm pissed.
Oh yea all the energy and protestation is shown here
ReplyDeleteGreat cinquain. Enjoyed the burst of color!
ReplyDeleteFantastic, profane and enlivening ! Red !
ReplyDeleteLoudly.
ReplyDeleteFreely.
Deeply.
Do it.