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sabre tooth dagger
bright killer silently waits
prey on the threshold
Rene ~ January 3, 2013
Careful out there, man
sabre tooth dagger
bright killer silently waits
prey on the threshold
Rene ~ January 3, 2013
Careful out there, man
epp...will be watching my back...smiles..
ReplyDeletesabre tooth dagger...ha, i like that. nice haiku!
ReplyDeleteThanks for animating the ice on the roof; I'll be more careful walking into those jaws now.
ReplyDeleteYou always manage to elicit a response. Sometimes it is a deep sigh. Sometimes it is a belly laugh. This time, with that last line... a guffaw! so glad you linked up, Rene!
ReplyDeleteThis is perfect! And I got just as much of a kick out of your labels:)
ReplyDeleteOh yes, those icicles are deadly weapons indeed. Your poem captures that.
ReplyDeleteWell Done..I have seen those long teeth snarling at me near my front walk! ;D Clever!
ReplyDeleteAh. I have never ever seen snow/ice. In my refrigerator and my glass only. Not natural.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct but well said!
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So beautiful but also, as you say, can be a killer.
ReplyDeleteInteresting imagery.
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