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food for thought

I want to eat your words
roasted and dipped
in a balsamic
vinaigrette
then lavishly
tumbled
in sesame seed
crumbles
I want to eat your words

I want to smoke your dreams
rolled up and lit
in a big fat
cigarette
I would deeply
inhale
every pretty little
herbal detail
I want to smoke your dreams

I want to drink your intentions
straight with no chaser
in a
blue collar bar
I'd pave over well
that ribbon of highway to hell
I want to drink your intentions

I want to have you for dinner
with some sugar snap peas
and a nice Chardonnay
I'd lick clean my dish
even have seconds
if I wished
lookout
I'm gonna have you for dinner

Rene ~ June 2012
A little Magpie fun

Image credit: Klaus Enrique Gerdes

Comments

  1. Now that really makes me think about the phrase, 'having company for dinner!' I like your use of repetition and the progression of stanzas.

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  2. well now that could be rather fun...especially considering how the intentions go down....smiles.

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  3. Sounds like one enticing meal, for sure!

    =)

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  4. Eating, smoking, drinking ~ I'm in, at least for one night!!

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  5. A woman that knows whwat she wants! :-)

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  6. I love this - part sensuous and part feast! :)

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  7. I love that blue collar cocktail....you set the atmosphere for a great story here..bkm

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  8. amazing as always. Love this one too.

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  9. smiles...good evening rene...9 more days...yikes...tomorrow is our last woohoo! smiles.

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  10. :-) Rene, I just loved this. So playful...

    Pearl

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  11. back again, third time is a charm...smiles...hope you are well rene

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  12. Quite a clever presentation, turning well-known aphorisms into provocative refrains.

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  13. Great picture!

    "I want to have you for dinner
    with a nice Chardonnay..."

    I'm having an ox-tail dinner, and smiling!

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  14. a fun and tasty write! i enjoy the levity and festivity here. ~jane

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  15. Makings of a great country song.

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