knowledge June 29, 2014 sedate sleight of handfools the firefor a timethough the thirst persists2014-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Magpie Tales Poem poetry senryu Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Audrey Howitt aka DivaloungerJune 29, 2014 at 11:48 PMWell--I just love this Rene---it says so much!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownJune 30, 2014 at 12:07 AMplaying it cool to make the opponent more eager... Give a little, make em want more... nice lil write - left me wantin' more. smilesReplyDeleteRepliesReplyDana DampierJune 30, 2014 at 12:13 AMThe thirst will always persist... great poem!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousJune 30, 2014 at 12:37 AMA good match for the picture.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergJune 30, 2014 at 2:42 AMWhat an interesting insight into the mind of masterful player ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBelindaBroughtonJune 30, 2014 at 2:44 AMoh, very nice, a lot said here in so few wordsReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCait O'ConnorJune 30, 2014 at 5:30 AMYes you say so much in so few words, I love it.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenaJune 30, 2014 at 8:00 AMSuccinctly a success!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneJune 30, 2014 at 8:01 AMBright, entertaining response to the prompt. Well done.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySilent Otto June 30, 2014 at 8:04 AMSuch a lonely passion.....ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJinksyJune 30, 2014 at 1:05 PMAn elegant poem - thank you.:-)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousJune 30, 2014 at 2:24 PMI like how much you manage to say in so few words. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyEddie BluelightsJune 30, 2014 at 2:27 PMAgree with everyone hereSo short yet saying so much.Loved itNice to meet you Rene ~ EddieClouds and Silvery LiningsReplyDeleteRepliesReplySusanJune 30, 2014 at 6:31 PMHahaha! ReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsJune 30, 2014 at 7:18 PMShe must drink up!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyVodka MomJune 30, 2014 at 8:44 PMboom.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyVodka MomJune 30, 2014 at 8:44 PMI want your book.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySilent Otto July 1, 2014 at 8:47 AMShe is chained to the house until the demons will out ....ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyIndigo RothJuly 6, 2014 at 4:36 PMDamn, this is so tight, so expressive. I struggle with poetry, but this is fantastic. Indigo xReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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Well--I just love this Rene---it says so much!
ReplyDeleteplaying it cool to make the opponent more eager... Give a little, make em want more... nice lil write - left me wantin' more. smiles
ReplyDeleteThe thirst will always persist... great poem!
ReplyDeleteA good match for the picture.
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting insight into the mind of masterful player
ReplyDeleteoh, very nice, a lot said here in so few words
ReplyDeleteYes you say so much in so few words, I love it.
ReplyDeleteSuccinctly a success!
ReplyDeleteBright, entertaining response to the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lonely passion.....
ReplyDeleteAn elegant poem - thank you.:-)
ReplyDeleteI like how much you manage to say in so few words.
ReplyDeleteAgree with everyone here
ReplyDeleteSo short yet saying so much.
Loved it
Nice to meet you Rene ~ Eddie
Clouds and Silvery Linings
Hahaha!
ReplyDeleteShe must drink up!
ReplyDeleteboom.
ReplyDeleteI want your book.
ReplyDeleteShe is chained to the house until the demons will out ....
ReplyDeleteDamn, this is so tight, so expressive. I struggle with poetry, but this is fantastic. Indigo x
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