Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
Well--I just love this Rene---it says so much!
ReplyDeleteplaying it cool to make the opponent more eager... Give a little, make em want more... nice lil write - left me wantin' more. smiles
ReplyDeleteThe thirst will always persist... great poem!
ReplyDeleteA good match for the picture.
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting insight into the mind of masterful player
ReplyDeleteoh, very nice, a lot said here in so few words
ReplyDeleteYes you say so much in so few words, I love it.
ReplyDeleteSuccinctly a success!
ReplyDeleteBright, entertaining response to the prompt. Well done.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lonely passion.....
ReplyDeleteAn elegant poem - thank you.:-)
ReplyDeleteI like how much you manage to say in so few words.
ReplyDeleteAgree with everyone here
ReplyDeleteSo short yet saying so much.
Loved it
Nice to meet you Rene ~ Eddie
Clouds and Silvery Linings
Hahaha!
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ReplyDeleteI want your book.
ReplyDeleteShe is chained to the house until the demons will out ....
ReplyDeleteDamn, this is so tight, so expressive. I struggle with poetry, but this is fantastic. Indigo x
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