duende May 26, 2013 "Ponytail" by Last Exit up from the soles a restless silken quake this life this absolute death a serenade unapologetic Rene ~ May 26, 2013 For Magpie Tales Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels blogging death desire faith life lit loss love Magpie Poem poems poetry Poets United writing Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Brian MillerMay 26, 2013 at 10:11 PMnice..powerful verse....life and death entertwine..and its best lived unapologeticallyReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenMay 26, 2013 at 10:15 PMBeautiful, strong poetry, Rene.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousMay 27, 2013 at 3:53 AMWow very powerful loved it!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneMay 27, 2013 at 5:42 AMForceful and compelling...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyMay 27, 2013 at 11:40 AMSuch a strong write. Love the "unapologetic".ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyparentforward.blogspot.comMay 27, 2013 at 2:05 PMI Really Like The Wordplay In This, Very Clever,It Brings To Mind Youth And Beauty And A Spirit Of Energy Unaware Of That Power.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJinksyMay 27, 2013 at 3:40 PMVery enigmatic...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLaTonya BaldwinMay 27, 2013 at 6:49 PMswept up by both the image and movement here. well done.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyhenry clemmonsMay 28, 2013 at 7:58 PMTrue, it doesn't apologize. Great economy of words creating a strong image.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousMay 28, 2013 at 10:17 PMNo apologies necessary...nice poem :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousMay 29, 2013 at 8:21 AMThis is beautiful and full of soul. I love it. I enjoy your style of writing. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJeffMay 29, 2013 at 10:53 AMA serenade not to be wasted invites a dance partner.Sing, sing, dance on.Cheers!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySusan LindquistMay 30, 2013 at 7:59 AMLife force shivers and moves up and out of this piece ... love it ...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidMay 30, 2013 at 6:21 PMLove your soles/souls word play...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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nice..powerful verse....life and death entertwine..and its best lived unapologetically
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, strong poetry, Rene.
ReplyDeleteWow very powerful loved it!
ReplyDeleteForceful and compelling...
ReplyDeleteSuch a strong write. Love the "unapologetic".
ReplyDeleteI Really Like The Wordplay In This, Very Clever,It Brings To Mind Youth And Beauty And A Spirit Of Energy Unaware Of That Power.
ReplyDeleteVery enigmatic...
ReplyDeleteswept up by both the image and movement here. well done.
ReplyDeleteTrue, it doesn't apologize. Great economy of words creating a strong image.
ReplyDeleteNo apologies necessary...nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and full of soul. I love it. I enjoy your style of writing.
ReplyDeleteA serenade not to be wasted invites a dance partner.
ReplyDeleteSing, sing, dance on.
Cheers!
Life force shivers and moves up and out of this piece ... love it ...
ReplyDeleteLove your soles/souls word play...
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