Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
nice..powerful verse....life and death entertwine..and its best lived unapologetically
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, strong poetry, Rene.
ReplyDeleteWow very powerful loved it!
ReplyDeleteForceful and compelling...
ReplyDeleteSuch a strong write. Love the "unapologetic".
ReplyDeleteI Really Like The Wordplay In This, Very Clever,It Brings To Mind Youth And Beauty And A Spirit Of Energy Unaware Of That Power.
ReplyDeleteVery enigmatic...
ReplyDeleteswept up by both the image and movement here. well done.
ReplyDeleteTrue, it doesn't apologize. Great economy of words creating a strong image.
ReplyDeleteNo apologies necessary...nice poem :)
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful and full of soul. I love it. I enjoy your style of writing.
ReplyDeleteA serenade not to be wasted invites a dance partner.
ReplyDeleteSing, sing, dance on.
Cheers!
Life force shivers and moves up and out of this piece ... love it ...
ReplyDeleteLove your soles/souls word play...
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