nice..powerful verse....life and death entertwine..and its best lived unapologetically
Beautiful, strong poetry, Rene.
Wow very powerful loved it!
Forceful and compelling...
Such a strong write. Love the "unapologetic".
I Really Like The Wordplay In This, Very Clever,It Brings To Mind Youth And Beauty And A Spirit Of Energy Unaware Of That Power.
swept up by both the image and movement here. well done.
True, it doesn't apologize. Great economy of words creating a strong image.
No apologies necessary...nice poem :)
This is beautiful and full of soul. I love it. I enjoy your style of writing.
A serenade not to be wasted invites a dance partner.Sing, sing, dance on.Cheers!
Life force shivers and moves up and out of this piece ... love it ...
Love your soles/souls word play...
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