The Fifty Cent Tour

Sunday, May 26, 2013

duende

"Ponytail" by Last Exit

up
from the soles
a restless silken quake
this life
this absolute death
a serenade
unapologetic

Rene ~ May 26, 2013

For Magpie Tales




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14 comments:

  1. nice..powerful verse....life and death entertwine..and its best lived unapologetically

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  2. Beautiful, strong poetry, Rene.

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  5. Such a strong write. Love the "unapologetic".

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  6. I Really Like The Wordplay In This, Very Clever,It Brings To Mind Youth And Beauty And A Spirit Of Energy Unaware Of That Power.

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  8. swept up by both the image and movement here. well done.

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  9. True, it doesn't apologize. Great economy of words creating a strong image.

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  10. No apologies necessary...nice poem :)

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  11. This is beautiful and full of soul. I love it. I enjoy your style of writing.

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  12. A serenade not to be wasted invites a dance partner.

    Sing, sing, dance on.

    Cheers!

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  13. Life force shivers and moves up and out of this piece ... love it ...

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  14. Love your soles/souls word play...

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