got caught in the spin cycle of your words. well done.
me too! A great poem that really moves. ;)
well done= love the last line!
I think a girl like that is yearn that weave the fabrics of joy...
Damn, this is awesome!!! Every word just drips like melted warm sugar-honey drizzling down the wrists to the inner elbows. Seriously. So sexy and yummy and just absolutely fantastic poetry.
PERFECT word-magic to go with that picture.
Yes, I liked it very much!
I agree...perfect words to go with that picture. I felt myself getting dizzy as I spun too back to my childhood. Days of wild spinning.
Love love LOVE "giggle storm chaser," especially.
I like 'everybody in a spool.' I can picture that!
This poem spun me down the page most effectively. Nice to see you, Rene.
Such a whirling, twirling pretty child she is! nice poem.
She's gone and done it, all right. Plum crazy girl ;)
this spun with youthful innocencegracias
Jelly roll and spool...yum.
Gold star good!
This makes me want to cheer--what a great energy to encounter on an afternoon!
This felt like a dizzy, twirling sweet treat!
Its fun to get caught up in the fun of young girls. Silly, yes...but somehow noble
You actually described the image to a T. Spot on! She did "spun herself plump dizzy."
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