The Fifty Cent Tour

Sunday, October 13, 2013

no bull

image via magpie tales

don't
be
fooled child
my bite is
worse than my bark and
my dark heart bluer than my eyes

2013 ~ Rene

25 comments:

  1. oh nice....the dark heart bluer than the eyes...we all have a reason for that bite & even bark...one so cute def can fool one..cause i think he rather adorable...

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  2. he is adorable looking... love your deftly worded warning to beware, Rene

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  3. A beautiful dog and a wonderful breed. You put words to many people's fear. Well done.

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  4. yep those blue eyes, but give a dog a chance!!

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  5. how you could doubt those blue eyes... :)

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  6. No doggy person ,I - those eyes look scary!

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  7. My cats object strongly to the doggy nature of this poem, but I liked it.

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  8. Pretty perfect! Nice touch... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  9. Inventive and shrewd response to the prompt...

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  10. woof....fair warning! Great take Rene!

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  11. Amazing how my take went off in an entirely different directions.

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  12. it is hard to believe there is any bad in this boy....

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  13. He just needs love! I cant get over his eyes! Frank Sinatra, back again.

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  14. Brilliant! I do love his blue eyes.
    Anna :o]

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  15. The absolute truth in less than 20 words. Perfect. Do you hear me? It's perfect.

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  16. Whatever has made his brown eyes blue? Great concise writing.

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  17. "Dog for sale. Eats anything. Loves children."

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  18. So much said in so less word!

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