rapture January 24, 2016 photo by Francesca Woodmanhow divine the childgone wildfresh tartconfection sweet hotjelly roll giggle & blues storm chaserdone spun herself plum dizzy now everybody in the spool2016-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments justsomethoughts...January 24, 2016 at 1:58 PMgot caught in the spin cycle of your words. well done. ReplyDeleteRepliesUnknownJanuary 25, 2016 at 6:24 PMme too! A great poem that really moves. ;) DeleteRepliesReplyReplyKathe W.January 24, 2016 at 2:27 PMwell done= love the last line! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergJanuary 24, 2016 at 2:40 PMI think a girl like that is yearn that weave the fabrics of joy...ReplyDeleteRepliesReply✿January 24, 2016 at 2:42 PMDamn, this is awesome!!! Every word just drips like melted warm sugar-honey drizzling down the wrists to the inner elbows. Seriously. So sexy and yummy and just absolutely fantastic poetry.ReplyDeleteRepliesReply✿January 24, 2016 at 2:43 PMPERFECT word-magic to go with that picture.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyannell4January 24, 2016 at 2:54 PMYes, I liked it very much! ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyDonna@LivingFromHappinessJanuary 24, 2016 at 4:05 PMI agree...perfect words to go with that picture. I felt myself getting dizzy as I spun too back to my childhood. Days of wild spinning. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyDe JacksonJanuary 24, 2016 at 4:27 PMLove love LOVE "giggle storm chaser," especially. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryJanuary 24, 2016 at 4:49 PMI like 'everybody in a spool.' I can picture that!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySanaa RizviJanuary 24, 2016 at 5:11 PMGorgeous :DReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyJanuary 24, 2016 at 5:40 PMThis poem spun me down the page most effectively. Nice to see you, Rene.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyNicholas January 24, 2016 at 8:41 PMSuch a whirling, twirling pretty child she is! nice poem.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMarcoantonio Arellano (Nene)January 25, 2016 at 5:56 AMthis spun with youthful innocencegraciasReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidJanuary 25, 2016 at 12:52 PMJelly roll and spool...yum.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenJanuary 26, 2016 at 11:42 AMGold star good!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySusan AndersonJanuary 26, 2016 at 4:46 PMExcellent!=)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyC. SandlinJanuary 28, 2016 at 3:10 PMThis makes me want to cheer--what a great energy to encounter on an afternoon!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBuddah MoskowitzJanuary 29, 2016 at 11:39 AMThis felt like a dizzy, twirling sweet treat!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMichaelJanuary 29, 2016 at 8:54 PMIts fun to get caught up in the fun of young girls. Silly, yes...but somehow nobleReplyDeleteRepliesReplyNoirfifreJanuary 30, 2016 at 12:07 PMYou actually described the image to a T. Spot on! She did "spun herself plump dizzy."ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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got caught in the spin cycle of your words.
ReplyDeletewell done.
me too! A great poem that really moves. ;)
Deletewell done= love the last line!
ReplyDeleteI think a girl like that is yearn that weave the fabrics of joy...
ReplyDeleteDamn, this is awesome!!! Every word just drips like melted warm sugar-honey drizzling down the wrists to the inner elbows. Seriously. So sexy and yummy and just absolutely fantastic poetry.
ReplyDeletePERFECT word-magic to go with that picture.
ReplyDeleteYes, I liked it very much!
ReplyDeleteI agree...perfect words to go with that picture. I felt myself getting dizzy as I spun too back to my childhood. Days of wild spinning.
ReplyDeleteLove love LOVE "giggle storm chaser," especially.
ReplyDeleteI like 'everybody in a spool.' I can picture that!
ReplyDeleteGorgeous :D
ReplyDeleteThis poem spun me down the page most effectively. Nice to see you, Rene.
ReplyDeleteSuch a whirling, twirling pretty child she is! nice poem.
ReplyDeletethis spun with youthful innocence
ReplyDeletegracias
Jelly roll and spool...yum.
ReplyDeleteGold star good!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
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This makes me want to cheer--what a great energy to encounter on an afternoon!
ReplyDeleteThis felt like a dizzy, twirling sweet treat!
ReplyDeleteIts fun to get caught up in the fun of young girls. Silly, yes...but somehow noble
ReplyDeleteYou actually described the image to a T. Spot on! She did "spun herself plump dizzy."
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