impact July 26, 2015 and now i was a part of it, alright my custom fit cradleindented formidablyinto earth from skya few looked down(three to be exact)with a blend of love,hate and who gives a damnupon a pillar yet i was theirscreation’s foundling 2015-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels Magpie Poem poetry Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Sherry Blue SkyJuly 26, 2015 at 9:07 PM"Creation's foundling"......fantastic!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousJuly 26, 2015 at 11:09 PMEnjoyed this one!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplytotomaiJuly 26, 2015 at 11:49 PMthat was some powerful ending - an exclamation point. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyDeepaJuly 27, 2015 at 12:34 AMbeautiful take on the promptReplyDeleteRepliesReplySanaa RizviJuly 27, 2015 at 8:11 AMStellar closing line :DReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJae RoseJuly 27, 2015 at 9:33 AMWhen we fall to earth we can create what we desire - angel, devil or human...perhaps the latter allows for all variations ;)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPearlJuly 27, 2015 at 6:35 PMJai said what I could not find the words for...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneJuly 28, 2015 at 6:14 AMHighly imaginative, and quite well done, take on the prompt.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGen Giggles July 28, 2015 at 2:56 PM"Three Men And A Baby"? Very interesting POV.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyIraJuly 29, 2015 at 12:56 AMQuite Imaginative and a lovely read!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRosemary Nissen-WadeJuly 29, 2015 at 5:48 AMBeing a part of it can be delightful. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKutamunJuly 29, 2015 at 6:50 AMOuch , Icarus landing ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathe W.July 29, 2015 at 1:04 PMvery well done- love the last line!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCifarJuly 31, 2015 at 3:54 AMimaginative and powerful pieceAshamedReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMagaly GuerreroJuly 31, 2015 at 8:20 AMLove the energy that sparkles out of each word. And the last line, perfect.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenAugust 1, 2015 at 11:27 AMYou have a gift for which we are all grateful .....ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidAugust 1, 2015 at 4:54 PMMaybe your best...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMichaelAugust 4, 2015 at 10:42 PMthe mixture of those three emotions. I read that 3 times out loud. quite enjoyableReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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"Creation's foundling"......fantastic!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this one!
ReplyDeletethat was some powerful ending - an exclamation point.
ReplyDeletebeautiful take on the prompt
ReplyDeleteStellar closing line :D
ReplyDeleteWhen we fall to earth we can create what we desire - angel, devil or human...perhaps the latter allows for all variations ;)
ReplyDeleteJai said what I could not find the words for...
ReplyDeleteHighly imaginative, and quite well done, take on the prompt.
ReplyDelete"Three Men And A Baby"? Very interesting POV.
ReplyDeleteQuite Imaginative and a lovely read!
ReplyDeleteBeing a part of it can be delightful. :)
ReplyDeleteOuch , Icarus landing
ReplyDeletevery well done- love the last line!
ReplyDeleteimaginative and powerful piece
ReplyDeleteAshamed
Love the energy that sparkles out of each word. And the last line, perfect.
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift for which we are all grateful .....
ReplyDeleteMaybe your best...
ReplyDeletethe mixture of those three emotions. I read that 3 times out loud. quite enjoyable
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