Enjoyed this one!
that was some powerful ending - an exclamation point.
beautiful take on the prompt
Stellar closing line :D
When we fall to earth we can create what we desire - angel, devil or human...perhaps the latter allows for all variations ;)
Jai said what I could not find the words for...
Highly imaginative, and quite well done, take on the prompt.
"Three Men And A Baby"? Very interesting POV.
Quite Imaginative and a lovely read!
Being a part of it can be delightful. :)
Ouch , Icarus landing
very well done- love the last line!
imaginative and powerful pieceAshamed
Love the energy that sparkles out of each word. And the last line, perfect.
You have a gift for which we are all grateful .....
Maybe your best...
the mixture of those three emotions. I read that 3 times out loud. quite enjoyable
Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :