typhoon February 15, 2015 image via Magpie Tales speak in a low house voice leave me unquiet, silently undone 2015-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments AnonymousFebruary 15, 2015 at 12:40 PMlovely.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTheresa MilsteinFebruary 15, 2015 at 1:44 PM"Leave me unquiet." Interesting juxtaposition. ReplyDeleteRepliesUnknownFebruary 15, 2015 at 2:34 PMthe storm under the radar.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyBrian MillerFebruary 15, 2015 at 1:48 PMthere is a nice intimacy to this....whisper to me....undo me...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 15, 2015 at 1:50 PMlove this !!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergFebruary 15, 2015 at 2:28 PMThere is an intimacy in a whisper... the undone would come for sure.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplykeith's ramblingsFebruary 15, 2015 at 2:38 PMShhh..... love it.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownFebruary 15, 2015 at 3:00 PMOh! Quiet, silently undone. I get it!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryFebruary 15, 2015 at 3:12 PMYou REALLY manage to write a tight poem in a few lines. Still thinking a bit about 'unquiet' and 'undone.' Nice to see you again!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKayFebruary 15, 2015 at 3:20 PMlove this....whispering..xReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsFebruary 15, 2015 at 3:49 PMOh yes, the secret is always best kept within one's whisper.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJennifer WagnerFebruary 15, 2015 at 4:59 PMPowerful and in just a few words. My kind of poem.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGabriellaFebruary 15, 2015 at 5:23 PMSometimes we need to be able to go through the undone moments alone so as to be able to move on.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLauraFebruary 15, 2015 at 5:58 PMsoft steamy passion… love this!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySherry Blue SkyFebruary 15, 2015 at 8:25 PMOh, the unquiet and undone say so much in so few lines. Nice to see you, Rene.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAudrey Howitt aka DivaloungerFebruary 15, 2015 at 8:36 PMYup to all the above--tight write! smiles to you!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaria MaineroFebruary 16, 2015 at 2:02 AMFeels. . . timely. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyManiparnaFebruary 16, 2015 at 3:22 AMLoved the whisper of 'unquiet' which is leaving it 'undone'... :-)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyOther MaryFebruary 16, 2015 at 7:20 AMPerfect. Not a word wasted.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyDrew Doyle Storm Snyder MinowFebruary 17, 2015 at 11:57 AMfantastic.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCarrie Van HornFebruary 17, 2015 at 1:50 PMVery sensual and subtle. Nice! :-))ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRommyFebruary 17, 2015 at 3:52 PMThere's a lovely understatement to this piece. ReplyDeleteRepliesReply21 WitsFebruary 18, 2015 at 5:29 PM..and all will be well!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenaFebruary 18, 2015 at 5:34 PMThat touch of serenity.............ReplyDeleteRepliesReplykeith's ramblingsFebruary 18, 2015 at 10:17 PMDelightfulReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidFebruary 19, 2015 at 2:31 PMI like the hushed image house voice conjures...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyOptimistic ExistentialistFebruary 21, 2015 at 7:19 PMThis really has a beautiful power to it...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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love this !!
ReplyDeleteThere is an intimacy in a whisper... the undone would come for sure.
ReplyDeleteShhh..... love it.
ReplyDeleteOh! Quiet, silently undone. I get it!
ReplyDeleteYou REALLY manage to write a tight poem in a few lines. Still thinking a bit about 'unquiet' and 'undone.' Nice to see you again!
ReplyDeletelove this....whispering..x
ReplyDeleteOh yes, the secret is always best kept within one's whisper.
ReplyDeletePowerful and in just a few words. My kind of poem.
ReplyDeleteSometimes we need to be able to go through the undone moments alone so as to be able to move on.
ReplyDeletesoft steamy passion… love this!
ReplyDeleteOh, the unquiet and undone say so much in so few lines. Nice to see you, Rene.
ReplyDeleteYup to all the above--tight write! smiles to you!
ReplyDeleteFeels. . . timely.
ReplyDeleteLoved the whisper of 'unquiet' which is leaving it 'undone'... :-)
ReplyDeletePerfect. Not a word wasted.
ReplyDeletefantastic.
ReplyDeleteVery sensual and subtle. Nice! :-))
ReplyDeleteThere's a lovely understatement to this piece.
ReplyDelete..and all will be well!
ReplyDeleteThat touch of serenity.............
ReplyDeleteDelightful
ReplyDeleteI like the hushed image house voice conjures...
ReplyDeleteThis really has a beautiful power to it...
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