the astronaut's lover February 07, 2011 silver white line upon your thighi kiss your mouth and taste the starsthe moon has become my rival Rene ~ February 2011 Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments ianFebruary 7, 2011 at 2:06 AMspacey...stellar, evenReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBrian MillerFebruary 7, 2011 at 6:16 AMwhen the job/hobby becomes the lover its not a good thing...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyIrish GumboFebruary 7, 2011 at 6:32 AMI say that is one lucky astronaut.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyVodka MomFebruary 7, 2011 at 6:35 AMxxReplyDeleteRepliesReplyFireblossomFebruary 7, 2011 at 8:12 AMWoman! I hate you, this is sooo good! And so short. How you do dat? Romantic, imaginative, sweet, original.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMarianFebruary 7, 2011 at 9:57 AMthis is so delicious, i plan to eat it for breakfast. maybe dinner, too.yum yum yum. mmm!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 7:33 PMAh, love this! Very nice and sweet! :o)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplysigned...bkmFebruary 7, 2011 at 8:34 PMI love that first stanza Rene' and the other two compliment it so well...bkmReplyDeleteRepliesReplyStafford RayFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:14 PMRenee, it's a poor man who has only the moon as his lover. A lover under the moon... now you're talkin'. Sorry, Irish Gumbo, there is no such thing as an astronaughty!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyNeoFebruary 7, 2011 at 11:15 PM:)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyClaudiaFebruary 9, 2011 at 3:00 PMoh i love this...!!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySteve IsaakFebruary 10, 2011 at 3:10 AMSublime, perfect, intimate work.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyCasey FreelandFebruary 11, 2011 at 10:48 PMLooks like the moon has done her share of inspiring poetry recently. Beautiful.CaseyReplyDeleteRepliesReplyJudy RoneyFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:13 AMYour poem along with the photo are inspiring. Not sure what's going on here but it is good. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 10:26 AMLike Judy, the poem is somewhat puzzling, but I get an inkling of a steamy love scene. Gorgeous photo.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTumblewords:February 13, 2011 at 11:34 AMPerfect - full of intrigue, sweetness and distance.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 8:30 PMYep, that's an alluring poem, you definitely got my full attention!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyEvelynFebruary 13, 2011 at 9:11 PM"the moonhas becomemy rival"what a great concept!love it.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyLinda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 13, 2011 at 10:36 PMThis one rocks,perfect and outstanding writing...A++ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 14, 2011 at 1:10 PMOut of this world! Beautiful.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKavitaFebruary 14, 2011 at 5:30 PMWooow!!! Deliciously ethereal, Rene... and oh so romantic!! Simple perfection!!! Aahh..that moon.... that kiss... sigh..ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:37 AMA beauty!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRachel HoytFebruary 15, 2011 at 8:49 AMAzfree stole my words... this sweet poem is out of this world!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplykolemboFebruary 15, 2011 at 9:43 AMthe last stanza really makes the poem come around, sets the image.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplygautami tripathyFebruary 15, 2011 at 9:58 AMGreat verse!lined up...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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spacey...stellar, even
ReplyDeletewhen the job/hobby becomes the lover its not a good thing...
ReplyDeleteI say that is one lucky astronaut.
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ReplyDeleteWoman! I hate you, this is sooo good! And so short. How you do dat? Romantic, imaginative, sweet, original.
ReplyDeletethis is so delicious, i plan to eat it for breakfast. maybe dinner, too.
ReplyDeleteyum yum yum. mmm!
Ah, love this! Very nice and sweet! :o)
ReplyDeleteI love that first stanza Rene' and the other two compliment it so well...bkm
ReplyDeleteRenee, it's a poor man who has only the moon as his lover. A lover under the moon... now you're talkin'. Sorry, Irish Gumbo, there is no such thing as an astronaughty!
ReplyDelete:)
ReplyDeleteoh i love this...!!
ReplyDeleteSublime, perfect, intimate work.
ReplyDeleteLooks like the moon has done her share of inspiring poetry recently. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteCasey
Your poem along with the photo are inspiring. Not sure what's going on here but it is good. :)
ReplyDeleteLike Judy, the poem is somewhat puzzling, but I get an inkling of a steamy love scene. Gorgeous photo.
ReplyDeletePerfect - full of intrigue, sweetness and distance.
ReplyDeleteYep, that's an alluring poem, you definitely got my full attention!
ReplyDelete"the moon
ReplyDeletehas become
my rival"
what a great concept!
love it.
This one rocks,
ReplyDeleteperfect and outstanding writing...
A++
Out of this world! Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWooow!!! Deliciously ethereal, Rene... and oh so romantic!! Simple perfection!!!
ReplyDeleteAahh..that moon.... that kiss... sigh..
A beauty!
ReplyDeleteAzfree stole my words... this sweet poem is out of this world!
ReplyDeletethe last stanza really makes the poem come around, sets the image.
ReplyDeleteGreat verse!
ReplyDeletelined up...