when the job/hobby becomes the lover its not a good thing...
I say that is one lucky astronaut.
Woman! I hate you, this is sooo good! And so short. How you do dat? Romantic, imaginative, sweet, original.
this is so delicious, i plan to eat it for breakfast. maybe dinner, too.yum yum yum. mmm!
Ah, love this! Very nice and sweet! :o)
I love that first stanza Rene' and the other two compliment it so well...bkm
Renee, it's a poor man who has only the moon as his lover. A lover under the moon... now you're talkin'. Sorry, Irish Gumbo, there is no such thing as an astronaughty!
oh i love this...!!
Sublime, perfect, intimate work.
Looks like the moon has done her share of inspiring poetry recently. Beautiful.Casey
Your poem along with the photo are inspiring. Not sure what's going on here but it is good. :)
Like Judy, the poem is somewhat puzzling, but I get an inkling of a steamy love scene. Gorgeous photo.
Perfect - full of intrigue, sweetness and distance.
Yep, that's an alluring poem, you definitely got my full attention!
"the moonhas becomemy rival"what a great concept!love it.
This one rocks,perfect and outstanding writing...A++
Out of this world! Beautiful.
Wooow!!! Deliciously ethereal, Rene... and oh so romantic!! Simple perfection!!! Aahh..that moon.... that kiss... sigh..
Azfree stole my words... this sweet poem is out of this world!
the last stanza really makes the poem come around, sets the image.
Great verse!lined up...
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