Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
smiles. fun wordplay...i rather like all the color unveiled...
ReplyDeletewhy those little sneaks!
ReplyDeleteyour leaves change several weeks before ours do in the mid-Atlantic region (aka Pennsylvania). I hope I don't blink and miss it. I keep mt camera ready now/
ReplyDeleteShort, clever. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteI love the fire of change. It's what makes me yearn for the fall.
ReplyDeleteThe image is a fantastically goo prompt and the poem rises to it beautifully.
ReplyDeleteWhat a brilliant haiku! Surprising too! Very clever!
ReplyDeleteMaybe I'm reading too much into it. But this poem seems to be aware that the color is always there and only shows after the chlorophyll goes away. Yet the poet still remains in awe of the beauty. That is the best way to use science.
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ReplyDeleteFred, do not look for scientific accuracy within these pages...you will be led horribly and magnificently astray
Rene
Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteWhat can be done to
ReplyDeleteabsolve me of the green
that my fire be revealed?
Love this haiku!!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for the nice comment over at my blog.
I'm with Fred Miller. Interesting idea that autumn shades are there all the time, masked by the green of photosynthesis! Colour meunioneun awestruck too.
ReplyDeleteColour me awestruck......! Fabulous. Would fit nicely into a song that line!
ReplyDeleteQuite nicely done Rene! I enjoyed that.
ReplyDeleteWOW!! So short but powerful. LOVE IT!!!. You do it again, REne. How do you do that? :)
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ReplyDeletei like the reveiling of the colors the summer has kept back until now..beautiful
ReplyDeleteTotally love it!
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for reading and commenting..I hope you all enjoyed a lovely autumn weekend and are now enjoying gorgeous fall weather
ReplyDeleteI love it! - hard to remember sometimes in thrall of summer...
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