I love the images this evokes...the hummingbird's wings, the veins of the heart as roadmaps.
I feel the course of the hummingbirds fly is exactly the kind of map you'll have with a broken heart.
"fold up my heart like a stolen map" - I love it!
Such a passionate write :D
lovely and romantic. the photo is fitting!
Oh I adore this...especially folding up our hearts like a map...nice.
I'm totally in love with this poem!
What a wonderful image you have penned.
We were both inspired by tiny flying creatures!
I love it, short and full of charm!
15 words to pack one wallop! You win!
Hmm, sounds like the secret entrance to a fairy land through dreams. I like the comparison to your heart like a stolen map. When I read that part, I looked up at the image and I can see the words reflecting in her sleeping position.
Now this is a curious mystery , i must think some more on it , but its got me in
Like a stolen map...oh that's lovely...
Nice little piece
The two images lay so sweetly together!
Sometimes they just travel all over it, don't they.
well done !
fold up my heart like a stolen map. that is friggin awesome. I might steal that for personal use. YOU HAVE BEEN NOTIFIED.
Rene, as always your poems are incredible. Love these words. Miss seeing your other humourous writings. With nothing here in a few months, I am sadly going to stop following you (for now) but do let me know if.when you start writing more again. Wishing you a wonderful 2016! :)
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