The Fifty Cent Tour

Sunday, October 25, 2015

travel advisory



chart a course
as the hummingbird flies
fold up my heart
like a stolen map

Rene-2015

Photo credit, Daniel Murtagh

28 comments:

  1. I love the images this evokes...the hummingbird's wings, the veins of the heart as roadmaps.

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  2. I feel the course of the hummingbirds fly is exactly the kind of map you'll have with a broken heart.

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  3. "fold up my heart like a stolen map" - I love it!

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  4. lovely and romantic. the photo is fitting!

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  5. Oh I adore this...especially folding up our hearts like a map...nice.

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  6. What a wonderful image you have penned.

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  7. We were both inspired by tiny flying creatures!

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  8. 15 words to pack one wallop! You win!

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  9. Hmm, sounds like the secret entrance to a fairy land through dreams. I like the comparison to your heart like a stolen map. When I read that part, I looked up at the image and I can see the words reflecting in her sleeping position.

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  10. Now this is a curious mystery , i must think some more on it , but its got me in

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  11. Like a stolen map...oh that's lovely...

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  12. The two images lay so sweetly together!

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  13. Sometimes they just travel all over it, don't they.

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  14. fold up my heart like a stolen map. that is friggin awesome. I might steal that for personal use. YOU HAVE BEEN NOTIFIED.

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  15. Rene, as always your poems are incredible. Love these words. Miss seeing your other humourous writings. With nothing here in a few months, I am sadly going to stop following you (for now) but do let me know if.when you start writing more again. Wishing you a wonderful 2016! :)

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