Your work always makes me feel, even when I don't want to. That is what poetry should do.
Thank you for telling me, Tessa, this means so much :)
Volumes here in these few lines, Rene.
I agree with Other Mary: there's a lot in these few - but exquisite and evocative - transcendent lines. Lovely words!
This is a very intriguing poem......makes one wish for more, which is the sign of a good poem!!!!
Such beauty in this brevity :-)
Lovely! You make me believe in the story you tell.
Reminds me of the Clannad song from "last of the mohicans "- i will find you ..
This poem speaks such volumes in such few words! Its amazing :DLots of love,Sanaa
Yes...less is more..this piece is packed with intensity and leaves me with lots of questions - which is always good
yes- once again.
Your specialty ~~ spare, chock full of meaning. Beautiful write!
Time can make a difference in the people we know.
I love brevity and you're a master at it.
"treasured things" - this was one of them.
I've missed these.
Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :