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loop

eye
pressed against
the glass of
fallen memory 
still i cry
had i known then?
yes
still i'd ride

2015-Rene

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  1. XJuly 19, 2015 at 6:32 PM

    It is better to live without regret. I would change nothing, for fear it would change today.

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  2. 21 WitsJuly 19, 2015 at 6:33 PM

    the glass of Fallen memory ....such a pleasing line!

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  3. Theresa MilsteinJuly 19, 2015 at 7:10 PM

    I like that no regrets attitude.

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  4. UnknownJuly 19, 2015 at 9:09 PM

    Ah the eye. It will be interesting to see how many others saw that and what they will write about it. :-) Nice write.

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  5. MaryJuly 19, 2015 at 9:27 PM

    Yes...still riding is the best choice!

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  6. DeepaJuly 20, 2015 at 2:46 AM

    Yes, I would still ride.
    Lovely

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  7. KutamunJuly 20, 2015 at 4:43 AM

    Thats the spirit !

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  8. Gemma Mira Wiseman aka Pamela AdamsJuly 20, 2015 at 4:47 AM

    An affirmation poetically expressed.

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  9. Jae RoseJuly 20, 2015 at 9:26 AM

    As the others say - i applaud the conviction of choice...some may say whatever we choose the outcome is the same..so best it is ours..and wholly believed...

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  10. Sanaa RizviJuly 20, 2015 at 9:31 AM

    A lot of amazing images in this poem :D

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  11. HelenJuly 20, 2015 at 9:42 AM

    Undoubtably the best way to navigate!

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  12. Sherry Blue SkyJuly 20, 2015 at 12:58 PM

    Yes. Still we'd ride.

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  13. BerowneJuly 20, 2015 at 1:38 PM

    That takes true grit; well written.

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  14. ZQJuly 20, 2015 at 1:58 PM

    Bravo!
    ZQ

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  15. MichaelJuly 21, 2015 at 12:25 AM

    and still...we ride...knowing all the while

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  16. Gen Giggles July 21, 2015 at 8:51 AM

    How true that even if we know the end we still ride.

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  17. AnonymousJuly 21, 2015 at 1:14 PM

    alive and riding ...!

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  18. totomaiJuly 21, 2015 at 6:05 PM

    it's therapeutic to cry. you'll be surprised, next time you are enjoying the ride once again. the ride of life of course

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  19. Anna Whiston-DonaldsonJuly 27, 2015 at 9:30 AM

    Yes!

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