The Fifty Cent Tour

Sunday, July 19, 2015

loop

eye
pressed against
the glass of
fallen memory 
still i cry
had i known then?
yes
still i'd ride

2015-Rene

21 comments:

  1. It is better to live without regret. I would change nothing, for fear it would change today.

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  2. the glass of Fallen memory ....such a pleasing line!

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  3. Ah the eye. It will be interesting to see how many others saw that and what they will write about it. :-) Nice write.

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  4. Yes...still riding is the best choice!

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  5. Yes, I would still ride.
    Lovely

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  6. An affirmation poetically expressed.

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  7. As the others say - i applaud the conviction of choice...some may say whatever we choose the outcome is the same..so best it is ours..and wholly believed...

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  8. A lot of amazing images in this poem :D

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  9. Undoubtably the best way to navigate!

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  10. That takes true grit; well written.

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  11. and still...we ride...knowing all the while

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  12. How true that even if we know the end we still ride.

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  13. it's therapeutic to cry. you'll be surprised, next time you are enjoying the ride once again. the ride of life of course

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