Your poem has shown well the pull of hanging on...the difficulty of letting go.
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Oh Rene........I am pushing seventy and the short answer is - letting go STILL SUCKS. LOL. Sorry.
a very short way of conveying such a powerful feeling
Always hard to let go... Holding on is so natural to us. Wonderful writing,
letting go might be hard no matter how many times we've done it.. beautiful.
Fine response to the prompt.
Good short poetry always has a punch like this. Good work.
Such a big question raised in this wonderful poem..perhaps we must hold onto the good..and let go of the bad?
Wow, such a great punch here. Thanks.
There is something particularly eerie about " heels and the pull of the ocean "
Yeah, letting go doesn't get any easier.
it's tough but you can do it easily next time :)
I loved the amazing message in the short, simplicity of this poem.
Just float and drift...
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