nice take on this image! Have a great day!
Beautiful! I love short poetry that packs a sweet punch like this. :-)
light can have such an effect on how we feel.
This is so beautiful..... Love the picture..Its so effectively portraying your thoughts :)Lots of love,Sanaa
I love the varying hues of the light. Loved this senryu.
Short and very poetic indeed! Wonderful write!
This was very nice... like the picture!ZQ
Love the write.. Somehow the grey has a way of working itself inwards.
A soul with 50 shades of grey...
What the light can do for us....wonderful!
What a beautiful poem!
Thank goodness for that bit of light. Sometimes a bit of light is all that is needed.
A poignant poem...
powerful image by the way. the poem really tells a story even with few words. not all are kept in the dark :)
Beautifully arranged, well done
Any light however small which nourishes our soul can only be good
Its a lonely poem, perhaps the sun will bring color.
The title is perfectly chosen for the words that so effectively portray that meaning. Loved this.
Sometimes grey is a comforting colour!
Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :