The briefness of the poem actually add more content.. the last line is perfect here.
i agree, the last line is perfect :)
Alot of depth and impact in your poem! Inspired... !!
This is an effective poem that really makes me think.... We all should have a river to transport us to the other side of a catastrophe, I think.
I admire that carving of the river ~
Oh how I love this. Every perfect word.
Beautiful economy of words to convey so much!
Perfection and I agree the end is wonderful!
...and life is so worth living.
Nice, succinct, and says it all in a few lines
Wow, say it like it is!
It's also very effective reading it from the last line to the first.
Handy things , rivers , you can move along them ....
A certain write and a comforting thought
Everything diminishes with the right company. Indigo x
Short and succinct! I like it. It's sweet.
Sharp and short and clever; well done.
i like this so much
great use of the river in this verse - real strength in each word
I love this...
Rene...one of my next books is entitled A River Runs Through Me: Outer Trauma | Inner Healing...I need this poem in the first page....xoxoxo
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