human superb February 08, 2015 Action Figures by Edith Vonnegut household saint eleven caught the train late hair & tumbled wild angelic down from heaven'sseventh stair 2015-Rene Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels magpietales Poem poetry Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments MaryFebruary 8, 2015 at 8:32 PMClever!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGillena CoxFebruary 8, 2015 at 8:44 PMYou made me smile with this oneHave a good SundayMuch love ...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyKathe W.February 8, 2015 at 8:47 PMinspired! Love it!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplybrudbergFebruary 9, 2015 at 12:52 AMNot easy being a household saint.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaria MaineroFebruary 9, 2015 at 12:56 AMVery good!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBerowneFebruary 9, 2015 at 4:31 AMNice response to the prompt...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryFebruary 9, 2015 at 8:01 AMany possibility you could interact with people over at poets united...you post your link weekly, and i never see that you comment on anyone's. ReplyDeleteRepliesUnknownFebruary 9, 2015 at 8:52 AMSorry, Mary! I am limited to using a crappy phone and sketchy service. I will try to comment as much as I can in the future. DeleteRepliesReplyReply21 WitsFebruary 9, 2015 at 12:08 PMOh very clever!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBrother OllieFebruary 9, 2015 at 12:21 PMCool piece - I dig your flow.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBrian MillerFebruary 9, 2015 at 1:12 PMwhew. just the thought of 11 kids...makes me want to pull my hair out...ha...there are plenty of moms I would give sainthoodto...fun flow in this rene...been a while...smiles.ReplyDeleteRepliesUnknownFebruary 9, 2015 at 1:36 PMYeah. It has! Still writing, though on mobile friendly sites. I've been reduced to using just my phone...and it gets old DeleteRepliesReplyReplyGabriellaFebruary 9, 2015 at 1:14 PMThis made me smile! Sometimes we do feel like household saints indeed.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRommyFebruary 9, 2015 at 1:50 PMHousehold saint! I love it. Our Lady of Perpetual Cleaning. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTorieFebruary 9, 2015 at 2:07 PMVery nice! Thanks for taking the time to visit my blog :)ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAnonymousFebruary 9, 2015 at 2:49 PMI also see something angelic there !ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyClaudiaFebruary 9, 2015 at 3:40 PMoha - when the kids were small i felt like a household saint myself sometimes - or wished for one..smilesReplyDeleteRepliesReplyUnknownFebruary 9, 2015 at 4:10 PMYou use enjambment brilliantly in this tight write. Love that!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyTess KincaidFebruary 9, 2015 at 5:18 PMThis tumbled off the tongue so very nicely...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyHelenaFebruary 9, 2015 at 5:46 PMSuccinctly sweet!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGraceFebruary 9, 2015 at 8:54 PMShort & snappy ~ Very nice Rene ~ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyMaryFebruary 9, 2015 at 10:23 PMThanks for commenting, Rene. I hadn't realized you had difficulty...I understand and accept! Be well, and keep writing.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyGen Giggles February 10, 2015 at 8:24 AMVery interesting take on the painting. Great poem. ReplyDeleteRepliesReplySilent Otto February 11, 2015 at 12:27 AMShe is foolishly beautiful , in a star maid sort of way ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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Clever!
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ReplyDeleteHave a good Sunday
Much love ...
inspired! Love it!
ReplyDeleteNot easy being a household saint.
ReplyDeleteVery good!
ReplyDeleteNice response to the prompt...
ReplyDeleteany possibility you could interact with people over at poets united...you post your link weekly, and i never see that you comment on anyone's.
ReplyDeleteSorry, Mary! I am limited to using a crappy phone and sketchy service. I will try to comment as much as I can in the future.
DeleteOh very clever!
ReplyDeleteCool piece - I dig your flow.
ReplyDeletewhew. just the thought of 11 kids...
ReplyDeletemakes me want to pull my hair out...ha...
there are plenty of moms I would give sainthood
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fun flow in this rene...been a while...smiles.
Yeah. It has! Still writing, though on mobile friendly sites. I've been reduced to using just my phone...and it gets old
DeleteThis made me smile! Sometimes we do feel like household saints indeed.
ReplyDeleteHousehold saint! I love it. Our Lady of Perpetual Cleaning.
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Thanks for taking the time to visit my blog :)
ReplyDeleteI also see something angelic there !
ReplyDeleteoha - when the kids were small i felt like a household saint myself sometimes - or wished for one..smiles
ReplyDeleteYou use enjambment brilliantly in this tight write. Love that!
ReplyDeleteThis tumbled off the tongue so very nicely...
ReplyDeleteSuccinctly sweet!
ReplyDeleteShort & snappy ~ Very nice Rene ~
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting, Rene. I hadn't realized you had difficulty...I understand and accept! Be well, and keep writing.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting take on the painting. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteShe is foolishly beautiful , in a star maid sort of way
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