Oh I love those closing lines...perfect!
The last stanza makes this for me as well. Good take on the image!
This so much said in so few words.
So beautiful and concise!
Lines in a nice rhythm.. Like it! :)
So well done.Anna :o]
Nice! Good to see you Rene...
Postcard in the mother tongue...love the playfulness of that line!
Bravo! Favorite magpie this week!~p
succinct and sexy!
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