Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
Oh I love those closing lines...perfect!
ReplyDeleteThe last stanza makes this for me as well. Good take on the image!
ReplyDeleteThis so much said in so few words.
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful and concise!
ReplyDeletenice !
ReplyDeleteLines in a nice rhythm.. Like it! :)
ReplyDeleteSo well done.
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Nice! Good to see you Rene...
ReplyDeletePostcard in the mother tongue...love the playfulness of that line!
ReplyDeleteBravo!
ReplyDeleteFavorite magpie this week!
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succinct and sexy!
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