a foreign country
waiting
waiting
wild
for a sun
waiting
waiting
for a nod
from
the beautiful one
to come
2014- Rene
this is the story of a girl who lived in the basement of the girl next door sheltered in the confines of a suburban tract house dungeon; her punishment for runnin' wild with dreams half unlatched she ran like a spirit in the night from those badlands wind blowin' through her hair shielding her eyes from the blinding light she hugged onto a shoreline of hope someday soon, she's not sure when her savior will rise up from the streets with an armload of rain soaked roses and second chances Rene ~ 2010 Click Here to join Magpie Tales creative writing group .
This is majestic in its simplicity!
ReplyDeleteLovely Rene, as CC says majestic.
ReplyDeleteYou achieved a paean of praise in few words...
ReplyDeleteThat heart seems vulnerable by the person's acquiescence . . . .
ReplyDeleteBeautiful writing and such a powerful conveyance of the situation.
Thank you
This is very beautiful.
ReplyDeleteOh yes she was, the beautiful one!
ReplyDeleteSimply powerful.
ReplyDeletelovely in it's simplicity!
ReplyDeleteLovely sense of anticipation here!
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
ReplyDeleteZQ
Kudos.
ReplyDelete