Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
How utterly sweet.
ReplyDeleteA peony to you, Rene.
Pearl
luv your Fibonacci, i haven't used that form in a long while, beautiful poem
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much love...
The picture beautifully connects with the poem. Lovely! :)
ReplyDeletegorgeous.
ReplyDeletethere is magic in those last couple lines rene...
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteZQ
lovely words..especially enjoyed the last line..
ReplyDeleteLOVE! as usual....
ReplyDeleteso beautiful!!
ReplyDeleteLoveliness!
ReplyDeleteLove this form.Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteAhoy ! The beacons of Gondor are lit ....
ReplyDeleteBloom to bloom to bloom! Very nice image.
ReplyDeleteBlooming marvelous! Succinctly and summery sweet alright!
ReplyDeleteCleverly done. I didn't know Fibonacci was used as a poetic form - not much used for epic poems?
ReplyDeleteA delightful write Rene. :-)
ReplyDeleteLovely, lovely write Rene!
ReplyDeleteLovely indeed.
ReplyDeleteLove it
ReplyDeleteA total surprise ~ Eddie