puttanesca tickles my nose
pulls me through
these streets, eyes closed
Mamma Sally, she knows
how to fill my bowl
daughter of the old country
pulled up her roots
for the better life, the big city
Mamma Sally, she knows
how far the red brick goes
raising up tomatoes to the sky
from her window box piazza
seven stories high
Mamma Sally, she knows
how her garden grows
olive oil, garlic, basil in harmony
hymns of joy
the blessed holy trinity
Mamma Sally, she knows
how to save my soul
© 2011-Rene
image:
Universal Studios Lot, Instagram by sessepien ( via Magpie Tales)
Enjoyed it. Sounds like it could be a song...
ReplyDeletePoetry both beautiful and al dente...
ReplyDeletevery wonderful sensory poem- I can smell that tangy sauce from here!
ReplyDeleteGreat rhythm and rhyme, not to mention content. Do you ever read your poetry aloud Rene? This would be fun to listen to.
ReplyDeleteThis would make an excellent song lyric!
ReplyDeleteOoh... so good.
ReplyDeleteHow nice! ready to be a song...Enjoyed very much.
ReplyDeleteVery evocative, Rene. Nicely done =) Indigo x
ReplyDeleteI think I would like Mama Sally, if she used olive oil, garlic, and basil. I think I am getting hungry now. (smiles)
ReplyDeleteI agree with others this has a musical feel..why do I have the need to make spaghetti sauce..creative piece of writing..
ReplyDeleteReally nice way to connect with the setting ... I can almost smell the gravy and hear her call the kids in to dinner ...
ReplyDeleteso enjoyable lines....making me hungry for more.... :)
ReplyDeleteLove how the picture reminds you of mother and cooking!
ReplyDeleteI love this. Your words and the image make for great nostalgia.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem. Mama Sally knows what's real. Great interpretation of the photo prompt. I could see her, and her window garden. Cool.
ReplyDeleteabsolutely loved this! part story, part life lesson...you did wonderfully with the photo!
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You certainly have a way with words ... love this!
ReplyDeleteWindow box piazza indeed! Love the lyrical quality of this one...
ReplyDeleteSome of us will be singing this all the way home! Lovely, and enjoyable magpie!
ReplyDeleteI think I might know Mamma Sally! This was delightful!
ReplyDeleteGood food, gardens and hymns! What could be better?
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