Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
ooh this is strong, powerfully written, & reminds me so much of how we were in my family of origin (though we weren't British)
ReplyDeleteat the turn of the twentieth century, with Victoria still on the throne, her one penny stamp on the envelope, being pen pals was precursor to meeting someone today on the internet; only now we can actually see each other, and come to more rational conclusions about the object of our affection; nice take on the prompt.
ReplyDeletebeautifully imaginative......
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful, ah .. the overwhelming meaning (and power) of the written word.
ReplyDeletethere is so much said with actually putting ink to paper- so much more than electronically pushing "enter"
ReplyDeleteI would like to read a novel that expounded further upon this subject matter.
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Yes an i love you too, pen pal ! ........
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Rene...
ReplyDeletetouching words.
ReplyDeleteI feel it was a most wonderful love too!
ReplyDeleteRene this was lovely, very touching!
ReplyDeleteAmazingly written!! Beautiful lines for the imagination!
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