i want to feel it
the ink on your pen
scratching
rough thoughts
rough thoughts
on smooth surfaces
i want to smell it
where your mind has been
the brew
of conquest
and raging desire
i want to see it
what you’ve made of
your world
bleeding out
from every damn word
i want to taste it
what that
kiss was like
kiss was like
and how
you felt
when it wasn’t yours
i want to hear it
the clash of swords
the war
hard fought
the territory won
Rene ~ 2013
let me experience what you have, when you put pen to paper....make me feel it, smell it....and want to escape or roll in it...smiles.
ReplyDelete:-) Big smiles to you, Rene. THIS is the reason I read.
ReplyDeletePearl
Lovely Rene, really lovely.
ReplyDeleteIt is a war getting words on a page, a battle won line by line. Love this.
ReplyDeleteReally digging this.
ReplyDeleteThe third verse is just so good.
i want to taste it
ReplyDeletewhat that
kiss was like
and how you felt
when it wasn’t yours
This stanza just really speaks to me!
A sensual extravaganza of want and need and relationship. Clever, Rene!!!
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I really love this ~ how the mind leaks thoughts and creations ~ thank you.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the feel of this..what every write should do..make you feel, taste, hear and experience and share the pain, joy, conquests..well done
ReplyDeleteExcellent! This really excited me! Let me be you for a moment!
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