listless July 17, 2013 not feelingso much of a muchnessanymoreI can't fake theconnectionsI won'thave the discussionsmy thoughtsoutdated my wordsa dead language rabidly stabbing at tabloid typosam ilosing you?writingwithred ink on thearmsof my t-shirtbuy the milkor pay the rent Rene ~ 2013 Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Labels crap life Poem poetry whining write writing Share Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments HelenJuly 17, 2013 at 11:38 PMMy dear Rene ... you go right ahead and rant as much as you like. As long as the ranting produces this kind of great poetry.ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyBrian MillerJuly 18, 2013 at 9:11 AMhey whatever it takes eh? lifes not always what we want...i am glad your comment box is open again..smiles...no dead language here...what was that old(er) song...shout, shout, let it all out...ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyPearlJuly 18, 2013 at 1:57 PMFruity Wheels: what a wonderful visual for this piece.Your thoughts aren't outdated, Rene. They're nebulous. PearlReplyDeleteRepliesReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Please drop a penny in a poet's hat :
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My dear Rene ... you go right ahead and rant as much as you like. As long as the ranting produces this kind of great poetry.
ReplyDeletehey whatever it takes eh? lifes not always what we want...i am glad your comment box is open again..smiles...no dead language here...what was that old(er) song...shout, shout, let it all out...
ReplyDeleteFruity Wheels: what a wonderful visual for this piece.
ReplyDeleteYour thoughts aren't outdated, Rene. They're nebulous.
Pearl