whisper to me
Magpie Tales image by Togan Gokbakar
the story
of your flight
your curious days
your sacred nights
whisper to me
the story of a life you wish
for the world to hold
for the world to hold
and I shall place it
like dandelion seeds
neath the mouth
of forever
Rene~May 11, 2013
Photo by Rene
dandelion seeds...like wishes...at the mouth of forever...love those lines rene...
ReplyDelete"The story of a life you wish for the world to hold" - now that's powerful
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totally wonderful....dandelion seed wishes...sigh...x
ReplyDeleteI really like this.
ReplyDeleteI love this poem - so simple and so evocative and the placing of the dandelion seed is so poignant - thanks. Nice use of words and I love the images.
ReplyDeleteWell expressed.
ReplyDeleteThese two seeds of eternity. This is outstanding, Rene , thanks
ReplyDeleteWhat a poignant and beautiful poem!
ReplyDeleteRemarkably effective writing...
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem on a beautiful concept.
ReplyDeleteOh Rene--this is gorgeous
ReplyDeletewow ... just wow.
ReplyDeleteYou've piqued my curiosity of what it would be like to be in flight :-)
ReplyDeleteI absolutely loved this. Nice write.
ReplyDeleteGreat images, word choice, line work. Awesome.
ReplyDeletePerfection, just like always.
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This is stunning I love the closing lines, absolute brilliance!
ReplyDeleteLove love that last line...nice write Rene...
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