scream technicolor wake the sky...haha i like line...think i might drop a comma or some punctuation in the middle of it...unless you meant it one thought...i read two there though...i like the intensity though in it...come on spring!
vernal... what a cool word. I'm ready for technicolor... plan on driving further south in a few weeks... perhaps Charleston, SC. :)
Awesome cinquain! It's calling spring out to dance!
Kind of a kick a$$ voice. Very confident and sure. I liked the voice and presentation alot. Very well work with the form.
I love 'the grey riot' ...and the colors that get unsprung..:)
..scream technicolor, wake the sky turn bright --- ha, now that's vernal.... great take... smiles...
You show 'em. Go get those clouds!
That's what we all long for, scream technicolor.
Wow, that says it.
Vernal is right.Shared this on FB. You knock me out, man.Pearl
scream technicolor... that's great, Rene
Rene, that's the way to deal with winter - a technicolour scream :-) Fabulous inages and use of the cinquain form.
Mmmmm- lovin' this!
"riot bright" you sound like my kind of person. :) we should all riot bright! x
We are having a raging snowstorm here right now. And I'm pissed.
Oh yea all the energy and protestation is shown here
Great cinquain. Enjoyed the burst of color!
Fantastic, profane and enlivening ! Red !
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