Image via Magpie Tales i won't be leaving here with you nor will you be staying with me for any longer than you see fit that is just the way of it it is the silent refrain of my being i won't be leaving here with you but i will stay, until my time is done as your ceremonial chosen one no, this won't be my last tour though it is the first time i won't be leaving here with you shh, now, darling. this is what i do i see it in your eyes, our time's drawing to a close. please don't mind the tears they come, they go, it's true... i won't be leaving here with you Rene ~ December 8, 2012
nice...i love places like that...probably not the healthiest food...but some of the most tasty...and you def catch up on the scuttlebutt....ha
ReplyDeleteGee this brings back fond memories for me. Some day I hope to follow that old Route 66 highway that I've heard some towns have brought many of the old forgotten places back to life!
ReplyDeletereally paint the setting nicely here. Scuttlebutt is a perfect word for a short verse, really adds much more to the piece than being but one word of the short verse. Really nicely done. Thanks
ReplyDeletethis remins me-- i had no dinner and getting hungry now...oh my... love it..love the pic and would like to jump right into it and order a burger...ha
ReplyDeleteCome to Nashua, Claudia! I take you to Norton's, my treat :)
DeleteCan't say it conforms to any form...I just thought these words looked cool hanging out together :)
ReplyDeletethis made me smile - always the perfect place for a little local gossip! K
ReplyDeleteShort and carefully chosen words...you created a story here ~ Good one ~
ReplyDeleteComfort food :) Diners are awesome. Nice capture of this feeling
ReplyDeletecatch up... I like that
ReplyDeleteClever-ish
DeleteHa, I am sure that often the scuttlebutt is composed of tasty morsels as well. Smiles.
ReplyDeleteThe food is just a prop
DeleteWe're really there to eavesdrop :)
Sounds like a very nice place to sit and write (short) poetry at, great picture.
ReplyDeleteScuttlebutt - a different menu every day; plenty of material for a poet to get to work with. That sure sounds like my kind of place :-)
ReplyDeleteClever write - so much said.
ReplyDelete'The food is just a prop
We're really there to eavesdrop :)'
(Much to be learnt this way!)
Love it BTW. Anna :o]
Nice word play. Puts me in a mood for a grill burger and a cup of coffee. Excellente!
ReplyDeleteDeliciously succinct!
ReplyDeleteBrilliant word play. Love it.
ReplyDelete...burger for dinner would not make it for me i say... smiles... scuttlebutt --- double + like...
ReplyDeleteNice, precise, evocative description. Your writing is grounded in a very particular setting.
ReplyDeleteHa! What a brilliant title for this very neat little description of a place we have all seen either in real life or in American films.
ReplyDeletehilarous pun -- you took me into the great grill!
ReplyDeleteAh, loving the retro look here and the short verse!
ReplyDeleteAwesome. Now I want a burger.
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