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Sunday, March 10, 2013

atoll

Meal Beach, Burra Isles, Shetland by Robin Gosnall 



you
are the morning sun on my neck
and the moon
over my shoulder

am
i the maddest hot magician
of your rogue
imagination

you
are my true astrological
high and the
puller of my tides

i
ride the waves of your affection
balancing
physics and nature

you
are an unfinished blood sonnet
a night song
a prophet of rhyme

i
run without stopping to breathe in
catching you
as you turn away

you
remind me with the truest eye
such great love
is not a given

i
stand tall in the force of your truth
kiss your head
and leave you to go

Rene ~ March 10, 2013

For Magpie Tales, 100 Word Song and d'Verse Poets

The 100 Word Song prompt is "Better Dig Two" by The Band Perry
and is my d'Verse Poetics: InterActions song choice

19 comments:

  1. This is an amazing write, and a wonderful expression of real love. Wow.

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  2. am
    i the maddest hot magician
    of your rogue
    imagination...nice...and i ride waves of your affection...ha...cool...whole lotta cool love going on in this rene...

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  3. you
    are my true astrological
    high and the
    puller of my tides...ooohhh...NICE... really love the energy in this...dang it..fine write..

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  4. Really nice...love your choice of words and your play on them gave the poem such vitality!

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  5. "The puller of my tides." Love defined...

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  6. Lucky bloke ! , wether he's corporeal or not , gday Rene

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  7. you my unfinished blood sonnet...lovely the ebb and tide of loving..bkm

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  8. I am loving this take on love and passion ...

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  9. Wow! this is fantastic! it's like... funky! It's got a beat. very cool. well done.

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  10. Really cool and with a mind of its own.

    =)

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  11. So many great images here, loved the description and the action here. "Unfinished blood sonnet" was the choicest metaphor, IMHO. Loved this, Mosk

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  12. Thrilling, beautiful, and romantic. I enjoyed the style and flow of this poem as well.

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  13. This is wonderful! Each verse, just wonderful! I love so many different lines.

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  14. Love all the versus, but the first two are my favorite. You gave this a lot of thought

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  15. This could make anyone long for true love once more! :-)

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  16. Great give and take, just like the sea...

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