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| Albert de Belleroche, 1885, head and shoulders of a young woman |
You're late...
Tell me again,
Why am I here?
Just pull your
hair back
follow my lead
Do I have anything
between my teeth?
Besides my
ass?
That's enough
Never heard you
complain before.
Where were you ?
Annie's back.
No!
Easy, Jake
she just needs a
friend
I need to know that
I can count on you,
Pam.
You can
things are different
now
I hope so
This is our time.
We need this spot.
Shit.
No pressure...
Why, Jake?
After all the hell I put
you through?
Sweetheart?
Only you
can make my blood
boil.
We're up next
Let's tango
Rene ~ January 16, 2013
Not so much poetry, but a bit of fun with dialog
in 100 words
For 100 Word Song
This weeks prompt
Feels Like We Only Go Backwards by Tame Impala
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Good stuff. Pint-worthy, even, Ms. Rene.
ReplyDeleteThat's a high compliment, Irish
DeleteCheers!
ha...def some fun in the dialogue...ass in the teeth eh? would be interesting to get a bit more of this...nice scene but there is def more story there...
ReplyDeleteVoices, dancers inside my head :)
DeleteHah!
Wow! I liked this. It looks like fun to try. I recently seen a poetry prompt to write a poem about the number 13. I think I may try that in a day or so. My youngest daughter was born on a Friday the 13th, so can't be that bad. Thank you for sharing this!!!
ReplyDeleteGive it a try Donetta! 100 Word Song is a great place to start :)
Delete13 is a special, wonderful number for me as well!
Can't wait to read what you've written.
Interesting dialogue. You can make so many assumptions or guesses as to the relationship.
ReplyDeletehow you spaced and used dialogue makes this so naughty and fun and interesting.
ReplyDeleteI like the last two lines. My mind went ina couple of places.
Thanks for the great song.