i got your back
sugar
i'm
se-ri-ous
as a heart attack
i'm clear and i'm
present
on target to
capture
and own it
whenever you've
got to
unclench, i'll be
your monkey,
your wench
sugar
i'm
se-ri-ous
as a heart attack
i'm clear and i'm
present
on target to
capture
and own it
whenever you've
got to
unclench, i'll be
your monkey,
your wench
gonna shake your
la-gun-a
whis-per
all them
magic words to ya
i got your back
lover
just you stop,
now
and let it all go
come slide on home
la-gun-a
whis-per
all them
magic words to ya
i got your back
lover
just you stop,
now
and let it all go
come slide on home
honey
fill me up
now
just let it all flow
Rene ~ 2013
So filled with affection. Really nice.
ReplyDeleteA very caring poem, Rene.
ReplyDeletethis is just so sensitive and filled with affection.. heart-warming write Rene
ReplyDeletehaha gonna shake you laguna....smiles...this was fun, lots of great word play...and heart felt as well...very nice rene
ReplyDeleteLovely
ReplyDeletea light hearted and "less than deep" take on the Poetics prompt...but that's my style, yo :)
ReplyDeleteThis is great (ok, you're the monkey)
ReplyDeletethis was a lot of fun to read... loved how you played with the words... great take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile...
ReplyDeletesing it, sister!
ReplyDeletebrought a smile to my face! Really enjoyed your take on the prompt...and sitting beneath the light-heartedness, is just that hint of affection. Very well balanced.Thank you for sharing!- stu mcp
ReplyDeletethis sounds totally Rene, and I smiled throughout. your imagery is a hoot, your lyrical pace is spot on. atta girl!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the swagger and slang, Rene
ReplyDeleteThis you do well