prepare
keep your wits
ye, all
from the way
of the storm
batten down
of the storm
batten down
them hatches
loosed hell's about
to be born
from butchers,
from bakers
from rosary
to be born
from butchers,
from bakers
from rosary
shakers
your children's
sand kingdoms
are ripe
your children's
sand kingdoms
are ripe
for the taking
no neck
no neck
is safe
stretchin' high above
the ruled
their wind,
a wolf's call
soothin' sheep
stretchin' high above
the ruled
their wind,
a wolf's call
soothin' sheep
easily fooled
prepare ye,
prepare ye,
citizens
read true
intentions well
keep your wits
ha some cool biblical allusions mixed in with fairy tales...def keep an eye on your children fore they are plundered
ReplyDeleteLove butchers bakers and rosary shakers...the dialect is a nice touch...
ReplyDeleteThis was really good, Rene
ReplyDeleteUnique and creative
And the dialect perfect
A fitting warning for any storm a comin
"from butchers, from bakers
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your children's sand kingdoms
are ripe for the taking"
wow! i just love that. really good write and sentiments here. x
"Batten down them hatches,loosed hell's to be born."
ReplyDeleteYep, and we just lived through it.
Yow- excellent - especially "your children's sand kingdoms are ripe for the taking"
ReplyDeleteFair warning for the storms ahead.
Totally cool! I'm wondering if mending those trouser holes will really keep out the lusty stuff!!!
ReplyDeleteI love your conglomeration of wisdoms and truths. The warnings are posted and I thank you for sharing them, Rene. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteVery cool...and my favorite part?
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from bakers
from rosary shakers
=)
Of course we must mend those holes, and fix the roof before it rains.... hold on to those quotes of wisdom for we always delight in them! Nicely done- it flowed so sweetly!
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These whole poem just SINGS! Amazing write...
: )
ReplyDeleteLoved all of this, clever word smithing throughout! Goes well with one of my favorite Wyeths!
ReplyDeleteThis really resonated with me, Miss Joyce.
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from rosary shakers
I wish I'd written that! :)
Agree with Margaret - this 'poem just sings' and swings you into the midst of it. Excellent write.
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